Poem by: darkism
Genre: Commercial Fiction
Submitted: July 06, 2010
Hear me,what i have to say,
kiss me,with your lips softly,
hold me,in your arms wisely,
tuch me,with your skin gently,
dont let go of me,because i know
that we can be forever together.
© Copyright 2016 darkism. All rights reserved.
Hear: What I have to say.
Kiss: With your lips softly.
Hold: In your arm wisely.
and so on.
Best wishes. Keep writing.
Good one, nice poem. The above suggestion is good!
Lovely poem my friend its so tender and careing=] Well done!
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