I saw A Fading Angel.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic
Sad poem about a girl slowly dying boy point of view.

Submitted: October 05, 2012

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Submitted: October 05, 2012



I saw an angel.

Face gleaming with joy.

Her chest rise and fell,

as she let out bubbling laughter.

She was still just a child.

Worries came after.

He wings where almost transparent.

They would grow.

She smiled at me.

More I wanted to know.

That angel and I grew close.

She grew up full for happiness.

Well almost....


Fading angel.

Above the world she could not fly.

Its was written on her face.

Dark rings around amber eyes.

Her face slowly sinking in.

Sleeves pulled past her hands.

against the world she could not win.

A plastered on smile.

At first I believed it.

But it only lasted awhile.

She tried to hide it from me.

All I wanted to due was set her free.

She began to ignore me.

I watched her form afar.

as years pasted by.


Fading Angel.

Her legs dangling on the edge.

I offer my hand.

She smiled like the first Time I met her..

Then she flew away from me.

Her body twisting in the wind.

Her hair twirling around her face.

A smile still pressed against her lips.

Crimson flowers bloomed around her.

I loud scream burst into the air.

Then I realized it was mine.

My world spun and became black.


Fading Angel.

After she left me,

I could feel.

I wanted to be free.

I wanted to feel her warmth.

I wanted her back.

I wanted to follow her.

Courage I did not lack.

I flew after her.

My eyes turned upwards.

My body felt heavy,

as wind shook my body violently.

It made me feel free!

Was this how she felt?

Just before I landed,

I saw an angel.



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