Short Story by: DarknessRecides
love, depression, teen, romance, adult, sad, funny, understand, depro
Submitted: May 24, 2012
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That was beautiful , it was very sad and very real. And only 15 to go threw all the heartbreak must be very sad. I'm only 14 and I never been threw such pain. I loved it .. we'll not like in a bad way. :) :(
Thanks alot:) its a short version i wrote it 2 times because i lost it on my phone o.O lol stupid me:P
oh add me on facebook please armand connor du plooy we can talk there if u like
Hi dearie:) i'd like to commend you for sharing this story because it takes courage to share a piece of your life in written work. I know the sadness in this this short story of yours don't tantamount to the sadness you felt. Keep me posted if you post a new one.
Thanks a lot!:p remind me 2 fan you later pls I'm using my phone so its abit difficult right now
Very great structure, i kinda feel we have met before and yes i share the same side of this story. I love how you represented time as an enemy but also an ally. Keep improving- Nel
Thanks a lot:)
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