Only Once Was

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic
this is one of my best i think atleast. not sure how good it is. but im looking forward to constructive tips. i know its not in great form and i dont bother capitalizing. mainly looking for tips about the substence.

Submitted: July 14, 2008

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words to replace lost time. time to heal. heal with moments. holding in to your one wish. sharing the shame. removing the smoke from your lungs. cleaning the black. revealing tenderness. only to be clouded by bitterness. identity lost in translation. words slowly turn to ash. shadowed by folly. you have to set it free. caged insecurities. dripping uselessness. pouring blissfulness only to leave none inside. suffering with a smile. eyes with no personality. forever lost in the breeze. calming yet inflicting. ash clouds cover the sky. only the glow of whats left inside to light your way. slowly dimming. life is giving in. no words. no time. infected. eating away. only soul to leave. no physical representation. no identity. only once was.


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