Love is, Confusing?

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Thinking about 'them', so I wrote this to try and get it out of my head... Make something out of my sadness...


I had thought that I loved you

But I think I'm losing touch,

I have fallen for another

But I’m losing you fast,

I don’t know what do to

What to say

Think and feel,

I still have slight feelings for you

What I have done with them is a mystery

That I hope I don’t find out,

This person is better than anything

Even life itself,

Some people “catch my drift”

I hope you understand this,

Yes, pathetic,

But it’s not you, it’s me,

I don’t want to hurt you

So I’m stuck in a dark place,

He has humour, character and more

You have me, I think that’s what you want,

I don’t know what to do

I don't love you,

I'm sorry,

But I think he doesn't know,

And I don't know what he feels,

Then again,

Love is, Confusing?


Submitted: September 11, 2012

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Awaneesh Shukla

i would die than hear this. it is something, i hear my love saying in my nightmares... ghosts don't scare me but such words do.. you know why coz we live miles apart and i havn't talked to her from half an year... well! nicely put, i agree with roberts. do the necessary you can be better :)

Tue, September 11th, 2012 6:54pm


Thank-you! :D

Tue, September 11th, 2012 5:16pm


Spur of the moment writing is just as beautiful as normal writing. I understand to an extent what it is you are writing about. You loved someone but not in the way they loved you and then you fell for another and found it difficult to be around your 'friend' without seeing it hurt him. Love is confusing and will always be so.


Tue, September 11th, 2012 10:02pm


Thank-you and what you said is almost exactly what I was trying to get at! :)

Tue, September 11th, 2012 5:18pm

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