No goodbyes (poetry)

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A love poem a sad love poem I hope you like its how some guys can be a total moron letting a girl go that is so special it reminds me of my best friend but not some parts

He is worthless
Worthless as a dull penny
He broke her heart
He will never have someone so special as her
She was like sunlight that never dies out
She had feelings for him
Why did he let her go
And he will never give a thought of it
While she drown’s  in tears
With fears that she will never love again
While she sits without him by her side
She never has a smile on her face
So sad and so heart wrenching
If only I could help
With no tears left of her
She lets her life pass away
Without any goodbyes..
 


Submitted: November 18, 2011

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Vampire17

OMG!!!!!!!!!! IT'S SOOOOOOOOOOOO SAD!!!!!!!! That's gonna b my new wallpaper!!!!!!!! :D

Fri, November 18th, 2011 12:27am

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Awwww:) thankyou your so sweet:) love you bvffe:)

Thu, November 17th, 2011 5:19pm

soulsky

Thats beautifuly sad,well done :)

Fri, November 18th, 2011 7:49am

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Thankyou:) means alot to me:)

Fri, November 18th, 2011 6:27am

alyy

THAT WAS VERY EMOTIONAL AND I COULD FEEL HER PAIN INSIDE OF ME. I GOT A WEIRD CONNECTION WITH THIS STORY IF YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN. I LOVE HOW ALL THAT EMOTION IS IN THE POEM.

Fri, November 18th, 2011 2:12pm

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Awwww thankyou:) thats so sweet of you and im glad you felt the emotion because thats what was aming towards:)

Fri, November 18th, 2011 6:27am

MariaRosales LOVE NEVER DIES

Wow that poems reminds me of my self and me X. Keep up your good work!

Fri, November 18th, 2011 2:59pm

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Awwww thankyou:)

Fri, November 18th, 2011 7:42am

Blackmirror

This is so wonderful! :)

Thu, March 22nd, 2012 8:46pm

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Thank you!!!:)

Thu, March 22nd, 2012 1:59pm

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