Bedtime Stories

Poem by: darlingdearest

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When I was younger, my mother used to tell me a story each evening called "Tír na Nog" This,translated to English, is "The Land of The Young" This poem is just reliving those days xx

When I was younger,

My mother would tell me

Tales of T na Nog,

The place that someday,

Sheknew thatI would go.

It was a land of eternal youth,

A land of love and joy,

And she's tell me this story each night,

Before my lullaby.

I would then close my eyes and dream,

Dream of this magical place,

Where I would be happy and content,

And feel no need to escape.

...

Today however, I wish to stay,

Here in my happy home,

Where I feel pain, anger and hurt

But I am never alone

For my mothers love is all I need

To feel eternal bliss

And nowall I ask for each night,

Is a quick bedtime kiss

Submitted: February 19, 2007

Memoir fantasy irish mother bedtime

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richwest

nice really like it

Mon, February 19th, 2007 5:33pm

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thanks!

Mon, February 19th, 2007 9:40am

EdwardJBradleySr

darlingdearest:

Well written, lovely, lyrical and whimsical. Just knew I would love your 1st poetic posting. Keep up the good work. Will be keeping a look-out for more.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Mon, February 19th, 2007 9:01pm

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Thank you...you are very sweet xxx

Mon, February 19th, 2007 1:17pm

Saturday Night

Very pretty piece of writing. Emotional and sweet.
SN

Tue, February 20th, 2007 12:26am

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Thank you xx

Tue, February 20th, 2007 9:34am

zephyrmail

very nice--flows along so easily---if this is a first, hope there will be more !! looking forward to it...

Tue, February 20th, 2007 12:58am

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yes its a first!! thnak you xxx

Tue, February 20th, 2007 9:42am

SophieMiddleton

I want to go to 'Tir Na Nog'. Well done. ;-)

Tue, February 20th, 2007 5:30pm

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hee hee thank you!!!

Tue, February 20th, 2007 9:42am

djtswing

very sweet. beautifully written. very cool, you'd rather stay home and be with your mother, true mother and child's love.
~Dan

Sun, March 11th, 2007 10:47pm

ddrandall

for a first read I am impressed... well done... I still remember the story my mum used to tell us kids before bedtime... I envy you that you still have your mum... but happy that you do of course... miss mine terribly... please read "A Walk I Will Always Remember"... my tribute to my hero... mum... write on my friend!

Sat, June 9th, 2007 5:17am