Chambers and Second Chances
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Book by: darlingILY
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Chambers, Murders and Second Chances
Submitted: June 13, 2008
Submitted: June 15, 2008
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Nice piece of work.Keep up the good work.
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Thank you. =]
Why didn't tell me you updated!!!
oh wait.
i just may have missed it.
but really good chapter.
I agree with.. Nepenthe
about the chatty tone of the novel
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=/ I thought I told you..eh..Sorry. But thanks a lot. =]
No its not boring the constant sex talk is a bit monotonous but a very good depiction of rich high school party rebels and i spose your putting in a lot of immoral sex stuff because were going to enter a very strange scary sexual pervertive world if what i get from the summary is correct??? keep going this is intense storytelling especially how your hitting relationship and sexuality ideology right on the buzzer........ do you or have you experienced this sort of world and thats what has inspired you??? If i may be so confronting to ask? If i am, sorry, but still intrigueing
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o.O Umm, some it were from personal experience, like the whole "rich-kid" ordeal, as I used to go a private school. But as for the rest, involving sex descriptions, and relationship creeds, are just gathered information from books, movies, friends, etc. But thank you for asking. =]
i would just like to know is our narrator a dude or a chick
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Aiden would be a dude. xD
Nice name too..... really strikes something deep
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:d Thanks.
im liking the way this has started...you mentioned rapists at the begginning and its taking us into a party so this story is going somewhere indeed! i will definetely keep following it..... well done hope it gets better
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Haha. Rapist. :d I do hope it does too. *tear*
LOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVEEEEEEEDDDDD IT! That was the best!
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xD Haha, thank youuuuu. *hugs*
Heh I really wish you'f get to the point and the action. Grrr!!!! Just kidding I really like the way your writing it I jsut cant bare the suspense I want to know how it all happens. But there is a lot of foreshadowing in this chapter. Soo.... I'm getting small parts to the bigger puzzle. Or so I think....BUM!BUM!BUM!
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xD On the contrary, (as mrs. putz said, the exposition usually, is boring...) So the first few chapters are, frankly, BORINGGGG. *sniff* :d
It's so not boring! I like the chatty tone of the novel...it really shows the kind of guy you're portraying Aiden as being. Looking forward to more.
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Thanks for reading, I really appreciate it.
And of course, I will. =]
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Haha!! Your discriptions make me laugh. lol.
But good job!! I can't wait to see where this all goes!
Let me know when the next chapters up. ^-^
~!~Megan~!~
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xD Haha, thanks so muchh.
again, very interesting. It's really good.
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Weeee. Glad you liked it, updates are up. =]
I like it.
I usually turn my head at the word blood and gore but for some reason I've begun to like horror stories.
:P
well anywayss
this is a greeattt start and can't wait for the next chaptersss!
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I used to be like that too xD Thanks for readingg.
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Ooooooooooo!! Sounds intriquing. XD
Keep me updated.
~!~Megan~!~
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xP I'm working on the next chapterssss. I just can't wait for the blood and gore. *opps* That's too much info. xD
Lol this could turn into an interesting novel! Can't wait to read more! :D Please check out mine!
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xD Thanks, and I wiill.
Heh that is really good. I think that you should keep writing it because I would like to see where it is going.
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Glad you liked it.
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