Unpleasent surprise

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Waking up here wouldn't be great

Submitted: November 30, 2011

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Devin as usaual was out drinking at a local bar. It was getting late, so he decided to drive home. Drinking and driving was never a good idea, but he didn't care. He got home safe and went straight to bed, he passed out from intoxication not remembering the car drive home. Hours passed and Devin awoke to the sound of laughter. He looked around and noticed that he wasn't home, but in some mysterious place which was unfortunately hot. He stood up and wondered where the fuck he was. \"Hahaha\", the sound of laughter echoed everywhere. \"Hello, hello is anybody there\" Devin asked. A strong wind brushed against his face causing his eyes to irritate. He closed his eyes for a while, then to a surprise opened them to find a house appear in front of him. Curiosity caused him to walked towards it. He reach to open the door, though surprisingly it had opened by itself. Too dark to see a thing , he stepped inside. \"Is anybody there\" he asked? Out of the darkness a pair of red eyes appeared. Scared, he ran outside. He turned back to see that the eyes had gotten closer. Too scared to move anymore, he stood there frozen in fear. Devin then fell to the floor surrounded in a puddle of blood. He realize that he was cut in half, but somehow alive. He looked up to see a mysterious figure smiling down at him, holding a scythe. The demon laughed and said \"Welcome to Hell\" as it began to stab him. Tears of blood ran down his cheek as he slowly whispered, \"why\"? The demon stopped and touched his head showing him his past. He saw himself driving home from the bar, when he realize that he had killed a girl with his car. The flash back stopped, \"had enought yet\", the demon asked and began stabbing him again.


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