I hope she's out there...

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A short poem expressing my feelings as to just wanting to find 'the one'.

I wonder if she's out there,

With brown or blonde long hair,

I don't really mind,

As long as it's 'the one' I find


She might be small,

She might be tall,

I honestly don't mind,

As long as it's her I find


I don't care how she may look,

So long as she's not a crook,

I truely don't mind,

As long as it's me she will find.


Submitted: December 02, 2011

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No criticism whatsoever. Criticism is only needed when there is a problem with it, but I see none. Good job! You definitely have talent. And I agree...the search for THE ONE is lonely and treacherous...maybe I'll find that special guy one day...just as I know you'll find the perfect girl. :) C'est la vie, c'est la guerre, c'est la mor.

Fri, December 16th, 2011 11:08pm


Thankyou so much!:) I'm beginning to doubt whether I will find that 'perfect girl' you speak of, but on a brighter note, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and my other work so much! :D

Sat, December 17th, 2011 10:29am

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