Who ever would have guessed...

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Just a random poem I wrote about looking back on a previous relationship, and some feelings I find hard to express any other way but through poetry! Hope you enjoy it.

Who ever would have guessed

How different things are

A year today we spoke in the car

About out feelings and sadness

Now I look back in madness.

 

Who ever would have guessed

That now no one seems to care

I feel vulnerable and bare

I pushed so many friends away 

Yet I wonder why no one would stay.

 

Who ever would have guessed

That everything that happened 

Would leave me so saddened

Full of anger and hurt

Both heart and soul crushed into the dirt.

 

Who ever would have guessed

One man could feel so much pain

But with so little to gain

Pain is such a natural emotion

It keeps my empty life full of commotion.

 

Who ever would have guessed

That I was one happiness never blessed.


Submitted: December 09, 2011

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Nabs

I'm surprised how come no one has yet appreciated this wonderful poetry!!! LOVELY!

Sat, December 10th, 2011 6:31am

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Aww thank you very much!! It's early days at the moment, just trying to gain fans the honest way rather than spamming people!

Sun, December 11th, 2011 3:00pm

Argetlam

Beautiful, as usual! I love this. Once again it embodies the way I feel about a certain guy...the pain...wandering like an addict in search of their next high...I felt love, and now feel more alone than ever. Just like before someone tries a drug, they don't feel they really need it...but then they try it, love it, and use it up. Then it's gone and you wonder if you'll ever see it again...(NOT a druggie by the way...just a metaphor)

Fri, December 16th, 2011 11:36pm

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What you said is very true, as I feel that exact same way, hence the poem! Thank you for the compliments, I'm so glad that you can relate to my work! I'll try and post something I wrote months ago, just after the break up, by tomorrow which hopefully you will also enjoy! I feel for you though, it is such a terrible feeling. Thanks again for the comment:)

Sat, December 17th, 2011 10:25am

moonphish

heart and soul crushed into the dirt....i love the way you phrase things....make me feel it

Fri, January 13th, 2012 9:28pm

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Thankyou!

Sun, January 15th, 2012 1:54pm

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