Who ever would have guessed...
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Poem by: dazzle
Who ever would have guessed
How different things are
A year today we spoke in the car
About out feelings and sadness
Now I look back in madness.
Who ever would have guessed
That now no one seems to care
I feel vulnerable and bare
I pushed so many friends away
Yet I wonder why no one would stay.
Who ever would have guessed
That everything that happened
Would leave me so saddened
Full of anger and hurt
Both heart and soul crushed into the dirt.
Who ever would have guessed
One man could feel so much pain
But with so little to gain
Pain is such a natural emotion
It keeps my empty life full of commotion.
Who ever would have guessed
That I was one happiness never blessed.
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I'm surprised how come no one has yet appreciated this wonderful poetry!!! LOVELY!
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Aww thank you very much!! It's early days at the moment, just trying to gain fans the honest way rather than spamming people!
Beautiful, as usual! I love this. Once again it embodies the way I feel about a certain guy...the pain...wandering like an addict in search of their next high...I felt love, and now feel more alone than ever. Just like before someone tries a drug, they don't feel they really need it...but then they try it, love it, and use it up. Then it's gone and you wonder if you'll ever see it again...(NOT a druggie by the way...just a metaphor)
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What you said is very true, as I feel that exact same way, hence the poem! Thank you for the compliments, I'm so glad that you can relate to my work! I'll try and post something I wrote months ago, just after the break up, by tomorrow which hopefully you will also enjoy! I feel for you though, it is such a terrible feeling. Thanks again for the comment:)
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Might want to go back and fix it. It has two different fonts. Didn't take away from the poem, though. The repetition of "Who ever would have guessed" works well with the poem, giving it a nice "meat" to the poem.
~MA~
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Thank you very much!:) and i'll change the font when I find the time :)
heart and soul crushed into the dirt....i love the way you phrase things....make me feel it
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Thankyou!
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