a dying girls last wish

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a dying girl wishes to see her mom...

this is a poem-story a story in a form of poem...
i had it in rhymes... enjoy

Submitted: January 06, 2012

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Submitted: January 06, 2012

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A DYING GIRL’S LAST WISH…
I wanna tell you something,
and I know you’re in a hurry.
But still I need a listener,
to my endless tragic story.
So mommy please come over,
coz I needed you today.
I wanna tell a story,
so come in every way.
Daddy misses you so much;
I hear his cries every night.
And I have to come by in his room,
and tell him “it’s alright.”
And big sister ran away,
coz now she’ll have a baby.
I know she’s just sixteen,
but now she needs you mommy.
Our poor youngest baby is sick and could even die.
I tell her “it’s okay”, believe me, it’s a lie.
And now I have a cancer,
I need you before I die.
Tomorrow’s gonna be my last day,
but no one’s gonna cry.
Coz daddy’s gone insane;
he’s the one who made big sister’s baby.
If only you could see her,
you could almost see she’s crazy.
And our poor youngest baby,
so sad she passed away.
So mom, come here and listen,
to what I’m gonna say.
Mommy please we need you!
To make things go away
Coz there’s nothing I can do,
but just lay down here and pray…
This is my last day of living;
it’s a very special day.
Coz after this day,
all bad things will go away…
(But there before she dies, the door creaked and opened.
A girl came in the door, whose eyes had gone so swollen.
her tears fell down as her mom held her,
on a moment very rare, at least by doing that, she saw how much moms care.
She’s gonna die so peacefully, and gonna leave them all.
And she slowly closed her eyes. And answer the lord’s call)


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