Perfection & Destruction

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

i wrote this at like 12:00 when I couldn't sleep. Pretty cool, huh?

Perfection & Destruction

Some say that Perfection isn't even real,

That Destruction must come before it can rebuild.

Are our hearts the same way?

Must they break every day,

Until it's the end,

Before we find the one who can permanently mend it again?

I personally don't know,

How such a thing could be so.

But the facts are real.

Destruction, in the end, must come,

Before anything perfect can be built.


Submitted: April 06, 2011

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unknown girl

Pretty cool indeed.
I love it and I "like" it :)

Thu, April 21st, 2011 8:20pm

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Thanks, glad you "Like" it.

Thu, April 21st, 2011 2:06pm

WaitingInTheDepthsOfTheSea

xD I like the use of the colors of the text. Its very intersting. I like the poem as well. That was awesome. I enjoyed it :D
~Sea

Sat, April 23rd, 2011 3:44pm

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Thanks, glad you liked it.
:)

Sat, April 23rd, 2011 10:30am

MissusMooksii

I really like this. The structure and the message it entails. Well done :D

Wed, May 25th, 2011 11:07pm

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Thank you again. I'm glad I'm getting feedback for my poetry as well as my novels. I appriciate any advice you have also.
:)

Thu, May 26th, 2011 1:11pm

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