Ex-Best Friend

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About a girl who claims to be my best friend

You say you love me

I say you hate me

Your words offend me

Your smile is fake

You call me a hoe

I call you best friend

You say I'm a slut

I say you're a true friend

You offend me in front of teachers

I act expressionless and forget it happens

Teachers yell at me

I take all the blame

You pretend you don't know me when others are around

I brag about you when I get the chance

You make my life worse than it is

I help you with everything

You make me drop my books and walk away

I help you pick your books up or tie your shoe

How can I continue to be so nice to you.


Submitted: January 14, 2009

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EmoScene

I know how you feel. Great Poem! =)

Thu, January 15th, 2009 12:55am

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thanks! and it sucks to have such few friends and one that doesn't like you =/

Wed, January 14th, 2009 5:16pm

EdwardJBradleySr

Death Angel:

Well written and expressed feelings of betrayal and diminishment. On the part of someone in whom we may have placed our trust. Gave it an "I Like It" vote.

Our friends and close family members, who may actually like and love us, can do us ever more harm and make us feel much worse than will our committed and abiding enemies. Most sad, but true.

Good job in presenting this and expressing, what is for many, a common experience. From which, nearly everyone must learn.

For a posting with a similar theme, you might want to read my posting entitled: "Love Intended: #1, #2 & #3".

Will read and vote for your other postings as well. At times, without commenting.

Thank you for becoming a fan.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Thu, January 15th, 2009 6:39pm

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Oh thanks man, I say, you use words I would never imagine, but thank you! If I actually worked on poem for more than 5 mins they might be good

Thu, January 15th, 2009 10:45am

Marathongman



What I would consider an excellent piece - 5 minutes is plenty of time to write a piece

Sat, January 17th, 2009 1:37am

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thanks then I never think about what I'm writing my hands do all the work :)

Mon, January 19th, 2009 9:42am

neji chan

Wow. This chic sounds like a total bitch! Well done though. ^^

Thu, January 22nd, 2009 9:13am

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ahh thanks Neji and she can be but that's why we love her

Thu, January 22nd, 2009 2:11pm

Brian W

I hope she sees the marvelous friend she had in you. A good poem full of loss and sadness

Sat, February 14th, 2009 9:36pm

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she's working on it... thanks

Sat, February 14th, 2009 1:38pm

Anastasia Starlena

Good poem I hope you have worked things out.

Take Care,
Ana

Wed, April 8th, 2009 5:48pm

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We worked them out..well..can't trust a prep but I mean I can act like her friend

Wed, April 8th, 2009 12:51pm

Girlwholovesvampires

i say you drop that friend! she's no good!

Mon, April 13th, 2009 3:30pm

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yea! me too :D

Mon, April 13th, 2009 10:49am

NazireC

Sorry about your friend, and its unfortunate sometimes people take advantage of others.
But I hope you can ditch the friend that does not deserve your affections.

Mon, January 18th, 2010 11:13pm

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