How could you do this to me?
Mystery Man you are no use to me
How could take my body
How could do me so wrong
You abused me in so many ways
No one knows what to say
Now look how life affects me
How could you be unable to see
You took my soul when you took my virginity
Now I don't have anymore breath in me
I want to take my life and you're to blame
Mystery Man why do you hate me
What did I do to deserve such torture
You make everyone think I'm broken
People talk behind my back
I'm sick of life and the way things are
How could you be so sinister
Everything that I treasured shut down
Everyone I talked to closed out
My thoughts of suicide grow more and more
I just can't take life anymore
Why did you do this to me Mystery Man
How could you hurt a little girl?
I was only 11 I didn't know a thing
When you took me I screamed
How could you be so horrible to me
You made me so horrible
You made me so shy
And all I ask Mystery Man is why
Maybe you could explain things to me
You need to make this right
Help me now Mystery Man.
Submitted: January 14, 2009
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Fucking rat bastard!
He ought to be gutted and then hung by his own stringy entrails!
I hate assholes like this guy! Absolutely hate them!
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I know how you feel on that one >.> glad you'd love to kill him for me tbh ! now all we gotta do is convince the justice system...hmmm
Wed, February 4th, 2009 1:30pm
It is so wrong what some do to others in this world and the pain and memories that stay with you. Although never forgotten the memories will slowly fade. Do not let them win by killing yourself. A good flowing poem that brought a tear to me.
Sat, February 14th, 2009 9:30pm
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aww don't cry! it's okay I'm over the stage now ;)
Sat, February 14th, 2009 1:35pm
wowee - is there an actual mystery man? i hate guys like that but when he told me top sleep with him i kicked him and ran off :) myn was a mystery boy coz he was 13 and i was 12 ........
Sun, May 10th, 2009 1:53pm
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no, it's not a mystery
Sun, May 10th, 2009 7:42am
OMIGOD!! you got raped?? gasp. im 11!! are you freakin kidding me??
did he like steal u rape u thenput u back tell me how!!
great poem btw
im so sorry
tell me!!
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he just pulled me out of the party I was at >.< Lucky the teenagers talking scared him he was going to finish me off...thanks for your concern =/
Sun, June 21st, 2009 4:13pm
he. was gonna. kill you???
omigod that..i cant even say it
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yea =/. oh well everybody has one near death experiance in their life....I've had like 5 >.> lol
Mon, June 22nd, 2009 5:56pm
I am sorry that you had to go through such difficulties as such a young little girl.
Life is not fair and I do hope that you realize it's not your fault and perhaps maybe the help of professional help would help.
I am really sorry and I really do hope things get better for you in the future.
Don't let this bring you down, though I may say, my words are just hallow gestures.
But, other than that, your poem was beautiful, emotional and raw.
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KittyKallous333
i loved it
Tue, January 27th, 2009 2:22am~~~KALLY~~~
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Thanks Kally, love your writing as well.
Mon, January 26th, 2009 6:25pm