hurt feelings brought upon by my own rapist

How could you do this to me?

Mystery Man you are no use to me

How could take my body

How could do me so wrong

You abused me in so many ways

No one knows what to say

Now look how life affects me

How could you be unable to see

You took my soul when you took my virginity

Now I don't have anymore breath in me

I want to take my life and you're to blame

Mystery Man why do you hate me

What did I do to deserve such torture

You make everyone think I'm broken

People talk behind my back

I'm sick of life and the way things are

How could you be so sinister

Everything that I treasured shut down

Everyone I talked to closed out

My thoughts of suicide grow more and more

I just can't take life anymore

Why did you do this to me Mystery Man

How could you hurt a little girl?

I was only 11 I didn't know a thing

When you took me I screamed

How could you be so horrible to me

You made me so horrible

You made me so shy

And all I ask Mystery Man is why

Maybe you could explain things to me

You need to make this right

Help me now Mystery Man.

Submitted: January 14, 2009

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i loved it

Tue, January 27th, 2009 2:22am


Thanks Kally, love your writing as well.

Mon, January 26th, 2009 6:25pm


Fucking rat bastard!

He ought to be gutted and then hung by his own stringy entrails!

I hate assholes like this guy! Absolutely hate them!

Wed, February 4th, 2009 9:29pm


I know how you feel on that one >.> glad you'd love to kill him for me tbh ! now all we gotta do is convince the justice system...hmmm

Wed, February 4th, 2009 1:30pm

Brian W

It is so wrong what some do to others in this world and the pain and memories that stay with you. Although never forgotten the memories will slowly fade. Do not let them win by killing yourself. A good flowing poem that brought a tear to me.

Sat, February 14th, 2009 9:30pm


aww don't cry! it's okay I'm over the stage now ;)

Sat, February 14th, 2009 1:35pm

Vampyre Princess

wowee - is there an actual mystery man? i hate guys like that but when he told me top sleep with him i kicked him and ran off :) myn was a mystery boy coz he was 13 and i was 12 ........

Sun, May 10th, 2009 1:53pm


no, it's not a mystery

Sun, May 10th, 2009 7:42am

MoNicA sToDaRd LoVes VAMpires

OMIGOD!! you got raped?? gasp. im 11!! are you freakin kidding me??
did he like steal u rape u thenput u back tell me how!!

great poem btw
im so sorry
tell me!!

Sun, June 21st, 2009 11:11pm


he just pulled me out of the party I was at >.< Lucky the teenagers talking scared him he was going to finish me off...thanks for your concern =/

Sun, June 21st, 2009 4:13pm

MoNicA sToDaRd LoVes VAMpires

he. was gonna. kill you???
omigod that..i cant even say it

Mon, June 22nd, 2009 9:51pm


yea =/. oh well everybody has one near death experiance in their life....I've had like 5 >.> lol

Mon, June 22nd, 2009 5:56pm


I am sorry that you had to go through such difficulties as such a young little girl.
Life is not fair and I do hope that you realize it's not your fault and perhaps maybe the help of professional help would help.
I am really sorry and I really do hope things get better for you in the future.
Don't let this bring you down, though I may say, my words are just hallow gestures.

But, other than that, your poem was beautiful, emotional and raw.

Thu, January 14th, 2010 11:15pm

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