I Need You Christian

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

I wrote this for my first kiss with a ton of emotion that needed expressing

My heart throbs
And your the love I once knew
But now I''m gone forever
Or so it seems I know
This is hard to do
I can't stop thinking of you
And everything you say runs through my head
And it paralyzes my moves
You define me in all we do
I need to grow up before I get hurt
Because one day you''ll be gone
My love ruined
My heart stopped
But right now I need you
I love you
It hurts to be gone
I'll be back soon
But I want to be there
Not trapped her
Without the love I once knew
I'm going crazy
Just two hours without you
It seems like the world has stopped
Everything is so slow
And all I see is what I need
And what I need is you
Are you okay without me?
Does your heart hurt too?
I need to know
Because I love you
You''re too far away
And I need you

Submitted: January 12, 2009

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Brian W

Young love is always overful with emotions and confusion you have captured it well in the poem. Well written

Sat, February 14th, 2009 9:25pm



Sat, February 14th, 2009 1:27pm

Vampyre Princess

i can relate a little :) good poem

Sun, May 10th, 2009 1:49pm


hehe :) thanks :D

Sun, May 10th, 2009 6:51am

Midnight Rose

Ahhh the first kiss! So romantic and sweet! Very well written! :D

Sun, June 21st, 2009 4:00pm


hehe thanks you ^^

Sun, June 21st, 2009 10:37am

MoNicA sToDaRd LoVes VAMpires

this is EXACTLY how i feel about my crush.

Sun, June 21st, 2009 11:17pm


well...Christian got killed by my best friend for being an abusive bf so...oh yea

Sun, June 21st, 2009 4:21pm


Interesting and a genuine write. Was this your first try?
If so quite well done for a first try.
The passage of emotions are in order and fluid.

Wed, January 13th, 2010 10:17pm


yeah it was my first attempt at my own poetry.

Wed, January 13th, 2010 2:27pm

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