You Cause Me Pain

Poem by: Deathstix

Summary

I guess you can say the narrator( who I'll make a guy) is going through something about love that they are confused about. They don't know whether to fall in love with the person or just reject them completely. It' a 'love/hate' realtionship if you ask me! (Oh, and this has nothing to do with my personal life- so no worries everyone)
Anyways, at the end they finally make their decision...whether to stay with their sweety or leave them!! HA!
If I were to rate this, I'd give it a 0 out of 10 XD But, heck, I don't like any of my works, so I guess that's natural.
Anyways, enjoy :)

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Submitted: May 13, 2012

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Submitted: May 13, 2012

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I yearn to see you happy

And make you feel okay

Turns out it makes me cranky-

everything you do or say

 

I hope you'll never notice

That your everything to me

Yet I hope that you do note this:

I can't wait to set you free

 

Turns out that I don't need you

Turns out that I do care

But, hey, I want to leave you

Yet at the same time that's not fair

 

Listen, I want to love you

And maybe kiss your lips

But to heck with all that you do

And the way you move your hips

 

I want to make you love me

But you don't understand

Until you see what I see

This pain I will withstand

 

So get your bags and move out

I'm tired of all your shits

And always hearing you shout

Make me go through many fits

 

So now I finally know

What's been happening with my brain

And all I wanted to show

Was how much you cause me pain

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 You Cause Me Pain

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Genre: Romance

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Genre: Romance

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Summary

I guess you can say the narrator( who I'll make a guy) is going through something about love that they are confused about. They don't know whether to fall in love with the person or just reject them completely. It' a 'love/hate' realtionship if you ask me! (Oh, and this has nothing to do with my personal life- so no worries everyone)
Anyways, at the end they finally make their decision...whether to stay with their sweety or leave them!! HA!
If I were to rate this, I'd give it a 0 out of 10 XD But, heck, I don't like any of my works, so I guess that's natural.
Anyways, enjoy :)
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