My Head Hurts.....

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

The most current aspect of my life and presumably others. I created this poem as a release of current emotions. Please, this is my first attempt at this....Dave

The many thoughts in my mind

The feeling of what’s lost and left behind

Trying to contain all my emotions from the bottom of my broken heart

When my world seems so dim and so dark


How can something like this hurt so much?

Complex, deep and I feel like I’m losing touch.

I’m tired, crushed, and out of sight

My mind, my heart I really don’t feel alright....


I gave you my everything

My mind, my body and my soul

How could this happen to me?

I feel like the asshole.


My head hurts…

I want this pain to go away

How am I going to get over this?

I guess I will…. one day.


Those two years were the greatest of my life

Pure happiness joy and laughs with one another

I have loved you like no other.

Now I have to pick up the pieces of my shattered heart

And consciously know this will be a painful time apart.


By D.Edwards


Submitted: July 27, 2014

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Stormbird Throneshaker

Well, for starters, if the one you are refering to reads this... providing that they are real, and not from or of the imagination, they may or could have, a change of heart, from knowing how you truly feel!
And this gets an I LIKE IT, from me!!!

Sun, July 27th, 2014 2:27am


Thanks for your comment Stormbird. This was about my now ex-partner, just felt like turning to poetry. Just feel like i can express how i feel without being judged too much (unlike social media). It's true, anything is possible for the future...thank you.

Sat, July 26th, 2014 7:37pm


Great Poem.. It touched me deeply. Keep up the good work.

Sun, July 27th, 2014 1:07pm


Thank you again, tough times can bring some of the best poems from people. Dave x

Sun, July 27th, 2014 7:44am

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