Faith, Fate And Everything In-between

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To be honest I don't really know what it is about, I never thought about it I just wrote it.

Faith, Fate And Everything In-between

I look at the clock

Somehow I can't see the time

I look into the mirror of darkness

For the first time I finaly see the light 'round the edges

The narrow valley that is my mind

Not the time for the river to flow

The time slows down

My life flies by so fast

Don't know if I'm coming or going

Can't I just stop and look back

To see when I left this dead end track

Maybe this is my life unstuck




I see the world for what it really is

A place waiting to die

My god it makes you want to cry

I'm here, not completely

I'm there, not close nor far

In reach

Will you reach out for me

Please try to find a way

If you hold my hand

I will stay, won't pretend

I won't pretend if you hold my hand

Make believe there is just you and me

That's what I have always believed

I believe in you

Do you believe in me?.

Written By -Skye Maison-

Submitted: June 08, 2009

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I don't know what its about either,but I like it.

Tue, June 9th, 2009 2:15pm



Tue, June 9th, 2009 8:23pm

Brian W

Okay I see this as a very good poem about discovering who you are as a person and you are talking to "H" in the second part.
"I look into the mirror of darkness

For the first time I finaly see the light 'round the edges"

You are seeing your future more clearly now.
Sadly as you age time goes faster and does not slow down. The world is what we make of it and I hope things change in the future. Hold on to the hand that reaches for you and hold tight.
I really liked this poem
PS. As usual I may be way off

Wed, June 10th, 2009 12:12am


Wow I think that describes it perfectly Brian.
thank you for reading :)


Tue, June 9th, 2009 8:26pm

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