Another Try...

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

From Broken one will rise...

Another Try

I gave up Tired and Tried

I'd lost all my pride.

Ripped from my soul from deep inside.

I gave up tired and tried.

Past heartaches appeared outside.

reminders of why I wanted to hide.

Former loves always lied.

causing one to never trust those whom tried.

Walls built in defense shattered by the tears you dried.

Once I gave up tired and Tried..

Now with a touch I find I am ready to give it another try....


Submitted: June 11, 2011

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this is truly positive, heartfelt and such a special message, don't give up trying!! WONDERFUL WORK, SO PRECIOUS!! stop by to see my new story, Love's Magic Confetti, when you get a chance. Take care, Vincey.

Sat, June 11th, 2011 1:28pm


Thanks I will as soon as I can Vince ~!

Sat, June 11th, 2011 7:08am

Imagine Words

*_* AMAZING *_*

Mon, June 13th, 2011 1:06pm


Thank you very very much one of my favorite poems to write :)

Mon, June 13th, 2011 9:35am


Ok. I can not say anything really on this other than you hit the nail on the head. I LOVED it, but could only click like.

Fri, August 10th, 2012 1:44pm


Thank you very much

Fri, August 10th, 2012 7:08am

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