"Can You Hear Me Now?"

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic
This isn't really a "script", but I didn't know what else to categorize it is. It's more a skit. It could be acted out, I think. And it's about a guy who's "talking" or praying, if you will, with God, and he's discouraged because God hasn't answered him. Going to this place and that place why he hasn't answered him yet, when all it is is that the man's a bit impatient and/or loquacious. It's also to say that God answers on his own time. Take it as you will. It's...cute. lol

Submitted: June 24, 2008

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“Can You Hear Me Now?”
(Cheerful)
“Hi, Lord! It’s been a while since we talked! How are things up there?”
Silence reigned…
(Cleared his throat)
“Mm, can you hear me? I just wanted to let you know I got saved!!That’s all. And that Daisy had her baby!”
And Quiet rampaged…
(Voice raised louder)
“Hey, can you hear me now?? I stopped doing all those bad, silly things too!”
Bleak Indifference loomed…
(More intense)
“Lord, can you hear me at all?? I need your help! I am in some trouble!!”
Mocking Stillness danced…
(Growing desperate)
“Why won’tchu say something God? If you’re disappointed in me or upset over something, at least say THAT!”
Cold Shoulder given…
“Oh, Father, please say something…anything! I surrender! (Hopeful tone) …Do you hear me NOW? Just a TAD?!?”
Oh, the Silent Treatment!
(Hysterical)
“I did everything that’s right and expected! I TITHED, PRAYED, WITNESSED, TESTIFIED, BEEN KIND TUH PEOPLE…EVERY-THING!!! And you STILL won’t answer me.(Lost and pleading) I ASK YOU, CAN YOU HEAR ME NOW, LORD? CAN YOU?!?!”
He broke down and dropped to his knees, crying.
And then he heard someone clearing their own throat.It is Him!
God said,”YOU'VE DONE EVERYTHING RIGHT AND EXPECTED, YES.... BUT THAT'S NOT THE PROBLEM.YOU SEE, I'VE BEENTRYINGTOGETYOURATTENTION A LONGTIMEAGO, BUTYOU COULDN'T HEAR DUETOTHESOUNDOFYOUROWNVOICE, ANDTHATMYFRIEND, WAS AMONOLOGUE!" (Laughter) "I JUSTCOULDN'TGETAWORDIN EDGEWISE."
The man, finally quiet, really listened for the first time in a long time.God teasingly asked,”SO...CANYOUHEAR ME NOW? CAN WE TALK?"
(Good-natured, humorous tone)
“Is that all right with you?!”
The man dumbly nodded assent.
(Light amusement)
“HI, YOU...”


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