Idk, i was just bored and i wrote this, i know that its not all the best, but im not a oetry master

so enjoy, and plz comment on what you think!

Life is the love of your friends and family

 That will soon dwindle into a pile of hate.

 Life is the song of the morning birds

 As they scream at the end of their fate.

Life is the time of the Father Time

He has the all the time in the world

But he doesn’t have enough time to see my pain.

Submitted: September 27, 2008

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He does, you just have to have hope, or try to, life is hard yes, i know that all too well, not all the world is Dark, there is Light, i found someone who gave me that Light, you'll find it too, someday.

Sat, September 27th, 2008 7:43pm


ik ik

Sat, September 27th, 2008 1:55pm


oh of course, i write thease becuase most people like them, and it was how i felt in april, lol

Sat, September 27th, 2008 7:50pm


you could have been my twin!!!

Sat, September 27th, 2008 8:25pm


oh really? lol

Sat, September 27th, 2008 1:27pm


Short and to the point! I like it

Mon, October 6th, 2008 1:45pm


thank you :)

Mon, October 6th, 2008 2:39pm


"i know that its not all the best, but im not a poetry master">??????? are u serius? ur an amazing poet!!!!! keep writing and remeber there is always hope in life no matter how hard things might seem don't give up cuz realy life is nothing but a test, like a test at skool u gotta work hardd on it to pass same with life u gotta keep moving till the end XDDDDD

Fri, April 24th, 2009 8:59pm

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