My other half

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic
Story of a girl, who left this world.

Submitted: September 09, 2014

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My heart was beating, my chest was hurting, my breathing is slowing, my vision drowning, and then I couldn't see at all.

"Isn't it hot in here?" I whispered.

Fate took my hands and held it to his chest. "Don't leave me, Greta. You're my other half, without you, I'm nothing... so please. Don't go."

He rubs my hand to my arm to my back ever so softly. "Brother,-" I leaned towards him, but fell back violently, coughing up some blood. "Greta!" Alarmed Fate.

"Brother, it's my time. Must I keep living, suffering day by day? You have to let me go, brother."

I reach for his face, only to find his hand on mine guiding it to his baby soft face. "You're the best brother I could ever ask for, my other half, the other me, my twin. I love you, so dearly, brother. And I shall always be with you, in your heart, and above watching over you, alongside with mother and father. You shall never be alone, my dear brother. You must be brave, now. It's time, my dear brother." 

That was the last time I heard his beautiful voice as he weep for me. I lost my sight, my hearing, and then my body became numb. Goodbye, my other half. I love you, my dear brother. 


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