Poem by: devilrod
Submitted: February 28, 2007
With hot blushing cheeks
I melted into your eyes
And tasted pure bliss
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You could make it longer
LONGER? NO!!! it is perfection as is!
pure bliss YES! I love it. 'melted into your eyes and tasted pure bliss'
hey, come back.......where are you?? LOL
hope you are having fun*** love, love and peace
Yes, haikus are simple , and pure. Glad that can enjoy some of them. I'll be back, when the muse calls. much love.......
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