Thinking of You 2

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

Sad rememberance.

There's a chill in the air

Crisp, cool

A soft rain is drizzling down

It's 3:00 A.M.

I stand there alone in the garden

Like a ghost

My tears are lost in the rain drops 

A somber, yet peaceful moment really

A slice, taken from time

I'm thinking of you

 

 

 

 

 


Submitted: March 05, 2007

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Damaelle

The only reason I gave you a 4 and not a 5 is because it left me longing for more! Nice work. I like it!

Mon, March 5th, 2007 5:02am

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I appreciate your sentiments. I'm glad you liked it.

Mon, March 5th, 2007 12:02am

leesah

This was really short but sweet, I like it because you painted a picture, loved it!

Mon, March 5th, 2007 5:11am

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I think that I'm inclined to short poems. Haikus and slices of a picture. I guess I try to release a feeling or idea as it arises.



I always anticipate what you write. Poems or cooments. Thank you.

Mon, March 5th, 2007 12:17am

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