Nothing more really.

And what would I put down

Or put forth

What would you like

The one that drives me

The one that carries me

What is your unconditioned request

May I flow, like a soft stream

From the still-dripping dream

What flowerswillyou be planted this spring

What will their colors be

Are they for all to see

Or only you and me


Submitted: September 02, 2007

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Spe

I like the different perspectives of this poem and especially the questions asked. Questions add more depth. Good job.

Sun, September 2nd, 2007 7:35pm

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Thank you.
That's what inspires alot of the time.

Sun, September 2nd, 2007 2:22pm

air

the begining of this poem sounded to me like you were asking us what kind of poetry would we like. 'one that drives me' one that carries me' 'what is your unconditioned request'? if so I would like a beautiful poem dripping softly from the sky to the sea. (you know I'm just teasing) :) I like this poem though, it's very,very nice :)

Mon, September 3rd, 2007 12:46am

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That's beautiful imagery.
Let me see what I can come up with.
Thank you.

Mon, September 3rd, 2007 12:11am

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