The Moon Dream

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

It is a poem about a young girl's dream.

It was a happy dream,

when I was dancing on the moon.

It was happiest moment for me,

which I remembered till next noon.



I was also beautifully dressed,

my gown was neatly pressed.

I had a fairy's crown,

that was coloured golden and brown.

I was wearing slippers with heels,

and a smart boy came wearing shoes with wheels.



I was surprised to think about it,

Oh such a pleasant dream!

In which we both ate a yummy chocolate cream.



Submitted: September 21, 2011

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Mukul Panpher

Short but a *sweet* poem by a lil girl .. impressive .. :) ..

Wed, September 21st, 2011 1:44pm

Cosmic Crow

I liked it. It made me think of the song by the police "Walking on the Moon." I like the fact that there isn't a lot of positive writers on Booksie. So I really like your uplifting poem that stands out from all the emo crap out there. Keep up the good writing.

Wed, September 21st, 2011 8:43pm


Dear Sir,
Thank you for appreciating my poem and encouraging me to write some more.I hope you read my poems which I am going to publish further.

Thu, September 22nd, 2011 6:37am

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