I Lose

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

about a someone who lose in love



sleepy head still thinking of you

lying here with nothong to do

beside me is myself

with a music listened by deaf.


memories of our past

that wasn't meant to last

it all ends in twelve midnight

when you were once my cryptonight.


i was blind who saw the future

of us two in different picture

while licking the final glass of tequilla

like a denying Madonna.


wrestling with the truthful truths

a battle that i bet my troupes

but, indeed, the war was fair

consequence to forget you, sire.


so back in my forbidden cage

a stallion absence of rage

lying here with nothing to do

sleepy head still thinking of you..



  i lose

Submitted: February 10, 2012

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Wed, February 22nd, 2012 9:47am



Thu, July 3rd, 2014 4:37am


thank you...

Sat, March 3rd, 2012 9:11am


I think this is a very good poem :) you had some very clever lines that I think were very catchy for the attention of the poem... great job, I enjoyed reading it very much

Sun, March 4th, 2012 1:14am


thank you for reading my peom...

Wed, March 7th, 2012 4:31am

DLCannon Reprise

Touchy. Love gets the best of us sometimes. Good rhyme.

Mon, March 5th, 2012 7:29pm


thank you for appreciating my poem..

Wed, March 7th, 2012 4:28am

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