Poem by: dibbledabble
conflict, self, haiku, cause
Submitted: February 24, 2013
Consider the cause
The conflict is with oneself
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Never saw it better parsed: the conflict is with oneself. I knew you were brilliant. So shines your haiku. I think you've got it! Warm regards, Wilbur
What an absolute delight! I thought of you just this morning, my beautiful lady! If there was one person I would have wished comment on this haiku it was you!
Made my weekend. Thank you!
Sage advice in haiku form; still don't know what 'sage' means! I see you received a comment from Wilbur; cool!
Yes very cool, It's nice to know she is still looking in, she is one smart lady, I miss her alot
Wow, I was thinking of Wilbur myself! I am not huge on Haiku but I like this. Very cool!
Thanks Joe, I have to say I am very pleased with this hauku and even more so at the visit of an old friend!
I am becoming a fan of Haiku thanks to you. I love that so much can be said in so few words.
I could never write one; I'm too wordy...lol
But I will continue to read your fabulous Haiku's! :)
Thanks you Ava for sharing my contemplations.
Very creative. Always a challenge to make a meaningful haiku. The word always makes me laugh...
Haiku! A Haiku!
That was quite a sneeze, bless you!
No, er, um... thank you.
Thank you, Bob, I find that a huiku tends to be a bit like a sneeze. Once you feel it coming you can't stop it!
Haiku is one of my faves. This one is brilliant, conflict within oneself, yes!
Dibs, I'm glad I meet you today. It had been a pleasure visiting and spending time with you.
My pleasure also. It is a habit I have formed, to look at in at myself and ask what motivates my responce, before engaging with others.
Hope you don't mind me making an assumption, especially because we just met.
I think the desire to help others is definitely a factor in what motives your response to others. At least that's my first impression.
Absolutely right! I have learned much about myself in the last couple of years and I intend to use that to the good of all. If I save one person from the road I have walked then I will consider my efforts worthwhile.
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