Poem by: dibbledabble
bang, grenade, unsafe
Submitted: February 15, 2013
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This is ingenious! A work of art to both look at and to read. Just make sure you don't go out with a bang, so everyone can continue to enjoy your brilliance. Am I overdoing the praise? I don't think so!
LOL, Oh no, I don't go bang, thats half my problem. Not releasing emotions.
The form is much better than Easter Wings, perhaps it can become a classic too. I like it a lot. It doesn't look much like the classic Mill's bomb though, more the American pineapple model, very foreign for a Brit.
Thanks Bert, I may reword it a little to get the form right. But for now the poem works. I'll repost if I do.
Thanks for the read
Art-ise; quite worth the wait!
Thanks Mike, sorry to have kept you hanging around, hope your pin wasn't out
This is great Dibs! Clever design and writing!
I love the way your mind works!
Thanks Joe, most kind of you
Wow! Creative, and entertaining! Your range of talent is amazing dibs. Very much enjoyed! :)
Thanks Ava, I enjoyed it too I once I mastered the booksie gremlins.
Thank you for your continued reads, been missing you :)
Just great! I can imagine what you went through, this is even more of a challenge than my shape poem. Booksie has it's own ideas when it comes to formatting. Very clever and well done.
Thanks Bob. It did vex me for a while
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