Infinity.........

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

look up in the heavens what do you see?

Infinity

Turn all the lights out, find the darkest place

Don’t the stars look fine?

A billion miles away shining

Stretched out gazing into the heavens in awe

How amazed and insignificant we are

Part of all this but impossibly small

Space repeats, the mind continually invents

Infinity out there, infinity within

Never-ending possibilities

 

 


Submitted: December 08, 2011

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bobthebuilder

Oh, I love it! The whole thing is wonderful, but the last two lines rock! Great!

Fri, December 9th, 2011 12:11am

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Thanks Bob, charitable words.

Dibs

Thu, December 8th, 2011 11:38pm

Please

Oh that is beautiful!!! i love it! bob is right, the last two lines ring in your head... lovely :)

Fri, December 9th, 2011 12:20am

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Please you are a delight. I know what you mean. The last two lines jumped out at me as I searched for an end to my musing

If only I could find a last two lines for the whole of the poem then I might just have got this poetry thing off to a T

Dibs

Thu, December 8th, 2011 11:41pm

attanasio

Bingo! We have another winner. I love feeling how small I am (hmmm I can hear the jokes now!) I mean I love feeling how big the universe is. I find it comforting for some reason that would take me infinity to explain!

The simple things can make a good poem!

Nice Job!

Fri, December 9th, 2011 1:37am

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Obi,

So dependable, You should have been a teacher, I am sure you would have inspired many a young mind. And the occational older one too

Thanks

Dibs

Thu, December 8th, 2011 11:47pm

Mike Stevens

I felt like I was soaring through the cosmos as I read this wonderful poem, but then I remembered my chair is on wheels! Nice write!

Fri, December 9th, 2011 9:43pm

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as i say there is infinity within

Fri, December 9th, 2011 1:46pm

shiner42

Well first of all, I was like, "YES, its small." Then I was like, "owe man I must a read it," but no. Awesome dude, you know,,,Anyhow, I truly believe in trying to expand your awareness as deep is you can in the infinte. Within and without. And you did it here, and in not so many words, as hoped for in this scary batttle of chance. Thanks, I needed that! Loved it

Wed, December 14th, 2011 7:58am

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Adolation from you is a real honour. You approach life from a different angle from most so to weave some magic on you is a real pleasure.

And yes it is a scary battle of chance, there is a poem in those words for sure

Peace to you

Dibs

Wed, December 14th, 2011 12:34am

Wu Lang

Hi Sir Dibs,

This poem is such a Masterpiece! A very short poetry but the words inside is incredible, magical, and it speaks a character of a man who's sweet, romantic and very thoughtful...Back in the Philippines, when it's full moon and the stars seem so happy encircling the moon...and I'm sitting on a big rock beside the seashore...thinking...planning for the future.Plus the fresh air and the lights of the fishing boat dancing in the middle of the sea...


Your such a brilliant writer...plan to be your fan...

Gonna click "i like it!!!"too.

Wed, December 14th, 2011 9:13am

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Wu

Your words in reply to my poem are very lovely. Thank you. And thank you to for the description of the moon and the stars. The sea and the boats. To sit and to take the world in like that is so wonderful isn't it. Not something I can do by the sea. To far inland. I prefer the mountains and lakes. Though the weather is not often warm enough for sitting and musing.

I will be sure to read some of your work

Take care

Dibs

Wed, December 14th, 2011 5:44am

Saaya

A beautiful wave of thought with its infinity of the concept..exclusively concluded!!!

Tue, December 27th, 2011 8:53pm

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Saaya, thank you for your comment it is wonderfully constructed and very much appreciated.

Dibs

Tue, December 27th, 2011 1:49pm

sherry1

Such a beautiful poem Dibs. This one can take you away and make you think. Thank goodness for possibilities, gives us something to hope and dream about. Sometimes we just need to be reminded of this tho. Truly enjoyed this. :) Sherry

Tue, January 3rd, 2012 11:36am

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Sometimes Sherry these thoughts are just waiting just under the surface waiting for something to release them. It was my friend here that allowed this fleating thought to escape. And it is such a pleasure to share this with them

Thank you

Dibs

Tue, January 3rd, 2012 12:00pm

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