She’s my quiet voice

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic




If I stay here I’ll never leave. 

I’m bad. I’m really bad. 

I have to write in the dark tonight. The candle isn’t light, there’s a blanket over the window and that voices in my head. 1. 2. 3. ? Who are She? And you? Do you exist?

FASCINATING. This is fascinating. 

dare enter here DON’T YOU carefully slit my throat. 

Oh no it’s sleepy.

But maybe if it dies every night, one day it won’t have anymore lives. How many do we have? Can we know?

STOP

I shouldn’t let myself into darkness that much. 

Shés dangerous for us. Look where she’s bringing you again. 

Loooooooooooooooooooooooooook at those faces with big eyes. Do they connect? 

Its so scary_if they really do?

They do. You should be scared. Snakes are crawling from their mouth, they’ll wrap your neck and lick your lips. 

STARE AT ME. What’s the difference? Madness is the same in each but it’s different. 

Time is connecting them. What time is it?

11:11

you know what time it is. I saw it. I have déjà vu of things that never happened. I knew what I know when I didn’t knew what I know. 

KEEP QUIT THEY’LL HERE YOU. 

I know this happens when It! happened 

but it’s quiet.

Please. I just want it to be quiet. 

If i light a match don’t set this bedroom on fire. 

Oh... too late. 




Submitted: October 01, 2018

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unmasked delusions

I mean no disrespect, but I was wondering if English is your second language? Your line, "who are she?" For example, led me to think so, though that might have just been a typo, because I read your other poem and I didn't notice any similar mistakes.
Anyways, I actually really liked this poem. It's good psychological horror, sounds like ramblings of a paranoid mad man with multiple personalities or demons. I feel there's good reason behind his lunacy having to deal with recurring deja Vu, and uncanny synchronicities. It's up to interpretation. I love the mood and unique phrasing and style. I find that foreigners write interesting poems because of the way they choose to word things; it's distinctive and creative. Again, not saying you are a foreigner, but just made me think of that.
I hope you post more poems.

P.s. have your heard of the 11:11 phenomenon?

Mon, October 1st, 2018 4:15am

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Yes I’m French actually sorry bout my weird writing but that line « who are She » was meant to be. I know it should have been who is she but I refer the She has being my voices name. Like an hole person but that She’s also multiple person at the same
time. But thanks for your nice comments and yes I’ve heard of 11:11 and deeply believe in it

Tue, October 2nd, 2018 9:52pm

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unmasked delusions

Oh, now I see what you mean with the "she", I guess it makes sense if you put it that way.
No need to be sorry.
Thanks for the reply.

Wed, October 3rd, 2018 3:31pm

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