A ride to remember

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

i was cherishing some of the memories of my best friend and mine and i came up with this poem ...............

 

the sky was clear
it was a sunny day 
and i clearly remember
the month was may
 
we were there at the school ground
playing football wet with sweat 
and i took a round and kicked the ball
it was a goal i bet
 
then in no time i changed 
and was about to leave
but there you stood 
all alone i concieve 
 
you looked me so hopefully 
and i knew there was no one
to drop you home
i approached you 
passing my bicycle over the loam
 
i asked you  how will you go
and you said i don't know
i asked you to sit on my bicyle
and we laughed and i gave you a bow
 
moments later we were on road
you were sitting and shaking
shouting that am gonna fall
and ending with a lol
 
i felt so embarassed 
and felt too shy
cheeks grew red
and looked up at the sky
 
and i wished when it will end
wished to end this ride
wished to run away
and throw her aside
 
but she was my best friend
and she counted on me 
so i had to drop her
weather i broke my neck or my knee
 
then finally came the time
when she jumped off my bicycle
and waved me bye and went away
but i wanted to talk to her
and wanted her to stay
 
 
the ride was finished
cooling was the breeze
cooling was my temper
i proudly confess
that was a ride to remember 
 
 
 
 
 
 


Submitted: December 31, 2011

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dibbledabble

Nice memory, touching. The innocent wistfulness of youth. My bicycle ride involving a girl when I was young resulted in a crown in my tooth.

Was peddling along gawping at a girl I wanted to impress. So intent on her was I, I didnt see the parked car ahead. And that was the end of my tooth and any kudos with her.

Regards

Dibs

Sat, December 31st, 2011 9:44am

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thanks for your feed back. and thanks for sharing your funny incident. Happy New Year 2012............

Sat, December 31st, 2011 1:48am

Diva Shefali

awsm memory yr..... i love ur poems, dey r all amazing!!!

Sat, December 31st, 2011 11:43am

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thanks.......hope you'll like my upcoming poems too

Sat, December 31st, 2011 4:11am

bobthebuilder

Enjoyed this poem, brought back some memories. Thanks.

Sat, December 31st, 2011 5:37pm

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thanks for your kind feedback

Sat, December 31st, 2011 6:43pm

ANGELEENA

m sorry.......n missin those dayzz

Mon, February 27th, 2012 3:20pm

The Enigma

Awww, how sweet!!
I remember my ex-best friend! I mean she got away from me some years back. I remember she taught me to ride bicycle, though she's a year small than me. we rided till our school and back. I want her back, though I never tell her what I feel.
lovely poem... made my memos alive!:)

Mon, March 26th, 2012 3:07pm

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i wrote this for my best friend, i mean ex-best friend who always lied to me and i trusted her blindly. but learned my lessons...

Mon, March 26th, 2012 8:49am

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