A ride to remember

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Poem by: divyansh

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i was cherishing some of the memories of my best friend and mine and i came up with this poem ...............

Submitted: December 30, 2011

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Submitted: December 30, 2011

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the sky was clear

it was a sunny day

and i clearly remember

the month was may

we were there at the school ground

playing football wet with sweat

and i took a round and kicked the ball

it was a goal i bet

then in no time i changed

and was about to leave

but there you stood

all alone i concieve

you looked me so hopefully

and i knew there was no one

to drop you home

i approached you

passing my bicycle over the loam

i asked you how will you go

and you said i don't know

i asked you to sit on my bicyle

and we laughed and i gave you a bow

moments later we were on road

you were sitting and shaking

shouting that am gonna fall

and ending with a lol

i felt so embarassed

and felt too shy

cheeks grew red

and looked up at the sky

and i wished when it will end

wished to end this ride

wished to run away

and throw her aside

but she was my best friend

and she counted on me

so i had to drop her

weather i broke my neck or my knee

then finally came the time

when she jumped off my bicycle

and waved me bye and went away

but i wanted to talk to her

and wanted her to stay

the ride was finished

cooling was the breeze

cooling was my temper

i proudly confess

that was a ride to remember

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dibbledabble

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Sat, December 31st, 2011 1:44am

Nice memory, touching. The innocent wistfulness of youth. My bicycle ride involving a girl when I was young resulted in a crown in my tooth.

Was peddling along gawping at a girl I wanted to impress. So intent on her was I, I didnt see the parked car ahead. And that was the end of my tooth and any kudos with her.

Regards

Dibs

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Sat, December 31st, 2011 1:48am

thanks for your feed back. and thanks for sharing your funny incident. Happy New Year 2012............

Diva Shefali

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Sat, December 31st, 2011 3:43am

awsm memory yr..... i love ur poems, dey r all amazing!!!

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Sat, December 31st, 2011 4:11am

thanks.......hope you'll like my upcoming poems too

bobthebuilder

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Sat, December 31st, 2011 9:37am

Enjoyed this poem, brought back some memories. Thanks.

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Sat, December 31st, 2011 6:43pm

thanks for your kind feedback

ANGELEENA

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Mon, February 27th, 2012 7:20am

m sorry.......n missin those dayzz

The Enigma

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Mon, March 26th, 2012 8:07am

Awww, how sweet!!
I remember my ex-best friend! I mean she got away from me some years back. I remember she taught me to ride bicycle, though she's a year small than me. we rided till our school and back. I want her back, though I never tell her what I feel.
lovely poem... made my memos alive!:)

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Mon, March 26th, 2012 8:49am

i wrote this for my best friend, i mean ex-best friend who always lied to me and i trusted her blindly. but learned my lessons...