now i have you

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

a divine moment in a love story...........

 

my heart was racing fast
skipping every beat
as you entered my room
as you kept your very first feet
i held your hand
and moved a step towards you
i saw it in your eyes
that i never knew
 
my hands wrapped around you
and i hugged you and embraced
i was so close to you
i filled that empty space
you tightened your grip
as i did too
i brought my lips to your ears
and wispered i love you
the moment was divine
divine in itself divine in your realm
i took that single breath 
took it in your name
 
your heart was thumping so loud
yes i heared it beating fast
as you heard mine
till every beat that last
your hairs were on your face
i moved my hand through them
held them aside  
to see through your angelic realm
 
i didn't knew that if the time was right
but your lips were on mine
every thing went numb
send chill up my spine
we were so close
nothing could had it wretched 
and it seemed like it was ages
those little moments how long it stretched 
 
now you were all mine
and i was all yours
i will never leave you
in my life's course
 
you made it all beautiful
it is no dream it is all true
i am so very lucky
cuz now i have you
 
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Submitted: March 30, 2012

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The Enigma

Awww, sucha sweet poem!!!
Good one bro! loved it!!!:D:D

Fri, March 30th, 2012 4:36pm

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thanks :D
glad you liked it......

Fri, March 30th, 2012 10:01am

dibbledabble

Very lovely Divy. like how you wrapped the end stanza up in such warm optimism.


Dibs

Fri, March 30th, 2012 9:27pm

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thanks Mr. dibs...glad you liked it

Sun, December 23rd, 2012 7:07am

Christian Taylor

Beautifully written! I really enjoyed this poem! Great descriptions/detail...makes it feel like your there when this is happening. Love it!

Sat, March 31st, 2012 12:52am

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thanks......

Sat, March 31st, 2012 12:41am

Richmaggs

Great poem. portrays lovely feeling and imagery.

i have 2 new poems; Axis and the Tree. Perhaps u could give me some valuable feedback ... cheers!

Mon, April 30th, 2012 6:20pm

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sureeee

Sun, December 23rd, 2012 6:38am

CrEaTiVeLy InSaNe

amazing one :)

Tue, June 5th, 2012 4:44pm

Author
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thanks...:)

Sun, December 23rd, 2012 6:35am

Anjali Negi

Awhh sho cute.. Nice 1 boy :)

Thu, December 27th, 2012 5:59pm

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