Don't be shy, Just be brave

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Writers' Tree House

Be shy only if you want to be shy at the moment. But, not every time......................

Never stood by myself 

I thought others are there for me,

They went away till the end

Got the victory to treat themselves

 

Do not be ashamed at all

If you have your parents along,

Stand straight as a soul with brave

Thank them for the birth they gave

 

You always have your shadow with you

The best friend who never leaves you,

Withstand your challenges alone

Should think out of your comfort zone


Submitted: August 18, 2021

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nikappuhamy

Nice poem D!! A piece of good advice, for someone like me..
Nishi = )

Wed, August 18th, 2021 7:31am

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Glad you enjoyed it buddy :)

Wed, August 18th, 2021 1:19am

Poetshri

You have picked an interesting topic. I loved the beginning. :)

Wed, August 18th, 2021 8:12am

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Thanks a lot poetshri =)

Wed, August 18th, 2021 1:20am

CM.N

Some people are born shy, no matter how old they are. I think it takes time for them to be comfortable before they can have a conversation with someone. Good topic  DiyaSL :).

Wed, August 18th, 2021 9:48am

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Thank you for your feedback CM.N.

Wed, August 18th, 2021 3:15am

Bert Broomberg

A wonderful poem. Well done.

Wed, August 18th, 2021 11:58am

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Thanks a lot Bert =)

Wed, August 18th, 2021 5:01am

Reyanne Elisha

Beautiful! Keep writing. Good job!

Thu, August 19th, 2021 3:43am

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Thank you very much :)

Wed, August 18th, 2021 9:00pm

Nithuni Amaya

Great poem Diyana! I enjoyed it very much...

Thu, August 19th, 2021 3:08pm

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Thank you very much Nithu =D

Thu, August 19th, 2021 8:09am

artistmichi

I can totally relate to this :') Its so difficult to speak up most of the times. Wonderful poem :D

Sat, August 21st, 2021 5:45am

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Thank you so much

Fri, August 20th, 2021 11:04pm

G.P.Sharp

A very thoughtful poem with a classic rhyme and song-like structure. I really like how you wrote this poem with a more "free-style" vibe when it came to the rhymes, creating your own pattern without restricting yourself to an exact abab or abba format.
However, because this is a Review Chain review, I do have to nitpick at least one thing for my review to count towards our house. For this poem, the only thing I can think of to criticize is that your word choice is very simple. There is nothing with that, particularly for short poems that are more about the message/rhythm than about analyzation, but I do feel this poem lacked unique diction or vivid imagery that would really set you aside from other writers.
Other than that, I do believe this is a lovely poem and I wish you the best for your future writings.

Mon, August 30th, 2021 1:57am

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Thanks a lot for your review Sharp. I got your point. I will definitely try to think a little out from simple poetry. Once again, than you for your criticism mixed compliment :)

Sun, August 29th, 2021 9:25pm

Mireena Cooray

a nice one, really true..
great... wish u the best

Mon, October 11th, 2021 9:57am

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Thank you Mireena!!!

Mon, October 11th, 2021 5:55am

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