You don't need a reason to SMILE !

Oh that's bad

Says your face

But you are telling

Nah it's great

 

Why can't you smile

Is it that bad

Or your teeth

Are not brushed well

 

Some talk to me

Like I'm the only enemy

You may not mean

But I feel it that way

 

Smile, smile, smile

It cost no money

Laugh a little and feel

What's real happy


Submitted: July 23, 2021

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Criss Sole

Good advice :) We should all learn to smile more.
Very sweet poem.

Sat, July 24th, 2021 8:06am

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Thank you so much!!!!
Thank you for taking your time to read............

Sat, July 24th, 2021 1:08am

SL Mali

Nice work. Good luck on your future writings. ;)

Mon, July 26th, 2021 9:10am

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Thank you so much Mali

Mon, July 26th, 2021 2:13am

nikappuhamy

Nice job Diya...
When we were in school I remembered how your nose is turning red when you are laughing ..
I really miss those days ..

Mon, July 26th, 2021 9:16am

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Oh, don't embarrass me
By the way thank you buddy ..............

Mon, July 26th, 2021 2:23am

artistmichi

This poem made me smile :) It is indeed not difficult to smile but some people still refuse to smile lol. I smile and laugh and whenever I see someone being grumpy, I'll show this poem to them :D Loved it!

Thu, July 29th, 2021 7:19pm

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Thank you so much artistimichi
Your smile made me happy.

Thu, July 29th, 2021 5:49pm

Sinali Sera

NICE Poem diyana loved it :)
.....

Sat, July 31st, 2021 2:56am

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Thank you so much Sineli :)

Fri, July 30th, 2021 8:33pm

Nithuni Amaya

Really nice poem it brought a smile to my face, great job.
Besides I think we all can learn Smiles will brighten our day =D

Fri, August 6th, 2021 4:14pm

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Thank you so much for reading =)

Fri, August 6th, 2021 9:23am

Lucas Barstow

I like the use of casual language and jokey tones here. I can also relate to this as I’m often told I don’t smile enough. Keep going, you’re only going to get better.

Fri, August 6th, 2021 4:32pm

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Thank you very much Lucus

Fri, August 6th, 2021 10:26am

Jator

Nice one. It reminds that we need to smile more

Sun, August 8th, 2021 5:11am

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I'm glad that you enjoyed it =D

Sat, August 7th, 2021 10:13pm

Roxanne B.

I really like how this poem flows and it definitely made me smile :D great job!!

Thu, August 19th, 2021 7:05am

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Thanks a lot Roxanne
Keep smiling :)

Thu, August 19th, 2021 12:56am

Ryan Eron

Well Done! ????????????

Fri, August 20th, 2021 6:33am

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Glad you like it. Thank you =)

Thu, August 19th, 2021 11:46pm

stormylfl

Yes, exactly! We don't need reasons to smile and some people just smile on their own without knowing the cause of it. I'm always like that too. A very light and hearty poem:)

Sun, September 12th, 2021 9:58am

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Thanks a lot StormyIfI =)

Sun, September 12th, 2021 5:18am

Mireena Cooray

Well done.....keep writing.
Smile will remain with u forever...
A smile is an inexpensive way to improve ur looks...

Mon, October 11th, 2021 9:41am

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Haha yes, the looks!
-Thank you :)

Mon, October 11th, 2021 5:54am

dewey green

Excellent! It is a proven scientific fact, that it takes 43 muscles to frown, and only 17 to smile!

Mon, November 8th, 2021 1:02pm

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Of course .................
~Thank you

Mon, November 8th, 2021 8:28pm

D. Thurmond / JEF

A Good poem, and good advice. Well-done!

Wed, December 22nd, 2021 12:35am

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Thanks a lot =)

Tue, December 21st, 2021 5:42pm

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