Wish I had Diamond Heart

Nithuni Amaya

Such a lovely poem, I Liked it a lot it's kinda relatable...
I hope you will get to meet ur friends soon and i hope this pandemic will end for all of us.
Great job!

Sluggy

Nicely done.

I had a wee thought, as I was reading the title. Diamonds are too material. Too costly to possess, if one should ever own it. Then you would have to keep it under lock and key, from those who want to steal it. If you never want your heart to break, then you need to make sure its not so hard and too expensive, as you many never feel and friends would be material.

I choose to make my hest out of Silly Putty. It practically has no value, unless your a kid. It's soft and plyable. Meaning it can be squashed and ooz through your hands, and reformed back into shape. Though it can be a bit addictive if one is fidgety. I guess such a heart would be a bit gross for some on a hot day. Ever try to get silly putty out of clothes. Ick! Well it goes to show you... if it is not one thing, its another. Nothing Is perfect, just accept what you have as it is, and hopefully you'll find any broken heart can be mended. Just don't use Crazy Glue. Geeze I could go on forever about Crazy Glue.

Criss Sole

Wow.... you are such a talented writer Diya.
This was a beautiful poem. I could feel the pain and the longing, and i could relate so well.
Very well written dear.

diya12

Ohh twin its nice and sad because I feel like you too
= )

nikappuhamy

You do have a diamond heart.. So, don't worry. I really love the poem. Hoping for moee like this..

Poetshri

Wonderful poem! This pandemic hasn't only shattered the livelihood of humankind but also hearts of the many. Hope, it will end soon.

Ann Sepino

Great poem! It's nice to read how you value friendship a lot. I appreciate the effort you put into formatting the different verses. I also hope that this pandemic ends. All of us are pretty keen on the chance to hang out and destress. :)

Genzu4750

All the nice things have already been said, and I can't think of something constructive to say. But the only two things that I think you may need to work on is:
1. Your English. I'm not saying it's bad, but you do need to at least be aware of the small mistakes, such as missing out an 'a' or two.
2. I, myself(being very odd and sometimes taking things too literally) thought that your choice of words could use some work, as you want a diamond heart because it would supposedly solve your negative feelings, but you described your human heart as shattering, then you wished you had a diamond one.
Diamonds can still shatter. So I found that a bit odd.
Sorry for the unnecessarily long comment, I might just be nitpicking.

88 fingers

Reading your poem, you might not have a diamond heart, but a teflon body. Nothing sticks to you and you keep going.

JDB401

great work

Symphony811

Wow it's beatiful

CM.N

I get what you mean. We sorely miss our family and friends during this pandemic. Let's hope it will end soon. Hope you can see your friends and go to school normally.

Mireena Cooray

great, i feel it too.
keep writing