Wish I had Diamond Heart

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Non-Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

My friends are best parts of my life. I need them a lot. This is the way I felt on a day so stressed and alone in this terrible pandemic situation.

There's no one to talk at all

Overwhelm alone in me

My heart's always broken

Wish I had a diamond heart

 

 

Crying and sobbing all day long

Sleeping neither stops me fall

Therapists all I hate the most

Bring back memories eternal and long

 

 

I wish that I'm bulletproof

No sad moments go through my heart

But that hits me like thunder storm

Wish my heart was made of stone

 

 

Stress hits me so often and hard

Doesn't leave me behind at all

*Hope I'll meet my friends very soon*

Oh, I wish I had a diamond heart

 

 

 

 


Submitted: August 25, 2021

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Nithuni Amaya

Such a lovely poem, I Liked it a lot it's kinda relatable...
I hope you will get to meet ur friends soon and i hope this pandemic will end for all of us.
Great job!

Wed, August 25th, 2021 12:48pm

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Thanks a lot Nithu. I hope to meet you too...............

Wed, August 25th, 2021 5:51am

Sluggy

Diamonds

Nicely done.

I had a wee thought, as I was reading the title. Diamonds are too material. Too costly to possess, if one should ever own it. Then you would have to keep it under lock and key, from those who want to steal it. If you never want your heart to break, then you need to make sure its not so hard and too expensive, as you many never feel and friends would be material.

I choose to make my hest out of Silly Putty. It practically has no value, unless your a kid. It's soft and plyable. Meaning it can be squashed and ooz through your hands, and reformed back into shape. Though it can be a bit addictive if one is fidgety. I guess such a heart would be a bit gross for some on a hot day. Ever try to get silly putty out of clothes. Ick! Well it goes to show you... if it is not one thing, its another. Nothing Is perfect, just accept what you have as it is, and hopefully you'll find any broken heart can be mended. Just don't use Crazy Glue. Geeze I could go on forever about Crazy Glue.

Wed, August 25th, 2021 12:59pm

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Thanks a lot for your review and for reading ! I wanted to get the meaning of hard material to the poem from diamonds. Glad you got it nicely =)
-Hope you enjoyed it.

Wed, August 25th, 2021 6:08am

Criss Sole

Wow.... you are such a talented writer Diya.
This was a beautiful poem. I could feel the pain and the longing, and i could relate so well.
Very well written dear.

Wed, August 25th, 2021 4:33pm

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Thank you Criss. This will be one of my favorite comments. Your lovely words mean a lot to me =)

Wed, August 25th, 2021 10:44am

diya12

Ohh twin its nice and sad because I feel like you too
= )

Wed, August 25th, 2021 4:37pm

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Sweet of you bestie :)

Wed, August 25th, 2021 10:42am

nikappuhamy

You do have a diamond heart.. So, don't worry. I really love the poem. Hoping for moee like this..

Thu, August 26th, 2021 1:34am

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Thank you Nishi. I am glad that you enjoyed it =)

Wed, August 25th, 2021 6:45pm

Poetshri

Wonderful poem! This pandemic hasn't only shattered the livelihood of humankind but also hearts of the many. Hope, it will end soon.

Thu, August 26th, 2021 5:49am

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I do hope the same. Thank you for the comment poetshri =)

Wed, August 25th, 2021 10:51pm

Ann Sepino

Great poem! It's nice to read how you value friendship a lot. I appreciate the effort you put into formatting the different verses. I also hope that this pandemic ends. All of us are pretty keen on the chance to hang out and destress. :)

Thu, August 26th, 2021 7:09am

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Indeed! Thank you for reading Ann =D

Thu, August 26th, 2021 12:18am

Genzu4750

All the nice things have already been said, and I can't think of something constructive to say. But the only two things that I think you may need to work on is:
1. Your English. I'm not saying it's bad, but you do need to at least be aware of the small mistakes, such as missing out an 'a' or two.
2. I, myself(being very odd and sometimes taking things too literally) thought that your choice of words could use some work, as you want a diamond heart because it would supposedly solve your negative feelings, but you described your human heart as shattering, then you wished you had a diamond one.
Diamonds can still shatter. So I found that a bit odd.
Sorry for the unnecessarily long comment, I might just be nitpicking.

Fri, August 27th, 2021 2:51pm

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Oh, no problem. I love such comments. Yes there's a lot to improve. I like to improve myself from such advises. Hope you could help my work as you can. Thank you for your feedback. One of the most useful comments ever. Once again thanks a lot !

Fri, August 27th, 2021 8:12am

88 fingers

Reading your poem, you might not have a diamond heart, but a teflon body. Nothing sticks to you and you keep going.

Sun, August 29th, 2021 8:57pm

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Thanks a lot for reading =D

Sun, August 29th, 2021 6:37pm

JDB401

great work

Mon, August 30th, 2021 1:56pm

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Thank you for taking time to read this :)

Mon, August 30th, 2021 7:39am

Symphony811

Wow it's beatiful

Sun, September 5th, 2021 4:15pm

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Thanks a lot Saanvi =)

Sun, September 5th, 2021 6:45pm

CM.N

I get what you mean. We sorely miss our family and friends during this pandemic. Let's hope it will end soon. Hope you can see your friends and go to school normally.

Tue, September 14th, 2021 6:29am

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I wish the same too. Thank you for reading CM.N :)

Mon, September 13th, 2021 11:54pm

Mireena Cooray

great, i feel it too.
keep writing

Mon, October 11th, 2021 10:31am

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I think that's a common feeling for us these days! Thank you :)

Mon, October 11th, 2021 5:57am

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