set as saving private ryan (but its my own work)

Reads: 229  | Likes: 0  | Shelves: 0  | Comments: 0

  • Facebook
  • Twitter
  • Reddit
  • Pinterest
  • Invite

More Details
Status: Finished  |  Genre: War and Military  |  House: Booksie Classic
set as the start of saving private Ryan in the boat,
but its solder Delaney 'DEL'

Submitted: January 10, 2011

A A A | A A A

Submitted: January 10, 2011

A A A

A A A


my story set in WW2 start of saving private Ryan.

My name is Private Delaney, DJ Delaney my nick name is 'DEL' the fist three letters of my 2nd name. I'm A Private 'PR' D.O.B 21/6/26 you have to be 18 to join the army but I'm only 17. I'm a boy, this will show if I'm a man. (the war)

June 6, 1944 Juno Beach

I'm on the boat! all that is going thought my mind is what's going to happen. I can see everyone in the boat.

''Silence''

The only thing that I can hear is the weaves hitting the boat. I can smell the sea air breathing it in, I feel terrified,sea sick,confident. Terrified am I going to live or die, sea sick being on the boat, confident to win the war and get some jerry's.

I'm a British solder, my uniform is (SAS)my badge has ''who dares wins'' . I have a (BAR) Browning auto rifle the best gun there is. I have a water bottle, a condom to stop my gun from going cold and stop working, a knife, 3 grenades, and 34 live rounds with me.

I looked to my right there is people being sick in the boat and in the sea I new it wasn't seasick it was I thought it was them being nervous well... who wouldn't this is to show you the test of life/man.

I couldn't move my hand's to have a drink I was that nervous then I hear 30 seconds...

My mind was paralysed, know one cares about their team, it's every man for them self's, I don't just want to win the war I don't want to speak German and I want to live but is that gone happen now is it?

It's time this is it! live or let die!


© Copyright 2020 djdelaney. All rights reserved.

  • Facebook
  • Twitter
  • Reddit
  • Pinterest
  • Invite

Add Your Comments:

More War and Military Short Stories