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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Historical Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

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Submitted: October 08, 2010

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MaddieJMPC

Wow, that was really good. The style, olden day, I think suites you perfectly. There is an abundant use of commas that, taking a closer look, might seem fit to get rid of and maybe one or two spelling mistakes were detected by me but other than those easily overlooked aspects, I loved it! :) Definitely turn this into a novel and tell me :)

Wed, November 17th, 2010 10:23pm

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Awesomeness! Thanks! I'm putting a second short story on here soon that's a journal entry from Donivan's point of veiw a few months later. Both were actually assignments for school were I was required to use alot of words but I was thinking of making this one into a novel but I'm not sure. I may just keep writing short stories about the characters.

Thu, November 18th, 2010 8:14am

MaddieJMPC

hey, that's not a bad idea actually. You should make the short stories, and make them tie together, you know? kind of like a series. The second one you're writing should sort of roll of this one onto a different event and you should keep switching between characters P.O.V's. You'd be unique for sure, and I'd definitely read them because they aren't intimidating 42 chapter novels, just little entries having common with one another. That'd be awesome!

Thu, November 18th, 2010 9:45pm

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Haha. Yah, that's what I was thinkin'since I'm basically aready doin' that for school.

Thu, November 18th, 2010 2:45pm

A7XRica

It was good but I think the ending lacks TOO MUCH. Haha, but it was good :)

Sat, December 4th, 2010 6:13am

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Mkay, thanks!

Sat, December 4th, 2010 9:43am

Luv2RideWriteAndLaugh

That was sweet. I loved how they just seemed to click. i like how it took place in the olden days. Great stroy.
Oh and I was hoping you could read my novel Poisoned Love. :D

Mon, December 20th, 2010 1:54pm

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Lolz. Thanks! And I'll totally check out and comment on your story as soon as I can but it may be a few days 'cause of Christmas and all that.

Mon, December 20th, 2010 11:29am

MeepyM

Pls check out my story yes my lord it's a historical fiction like your and I love love love this story and would encourage you to make it a series I would 100 percent read it have a nice day :)

Sun, June 5th, 2011 9:32am

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Aww, thank you soo much! I would actually love to check out your story!

Thu, June 30th, 2011 8:33pm

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