I Just Couldn't Revolve Around You

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

taken from my book, "Never Felt So Single"

I Just Couldn't Revolve Around You



Had a moment of love


Then it was gone

I took your breath


Just 'cause I knew how


Wasn't much of a hard thing


Do at all


Of thee effort



Was so

Easy that night

But the morning showed you as ugly

And I couldn't ignore

Well I just could not

Hide you forever

Kicking you out only took two tries

Getting over you wasn't even a chore

For I've screwed


Who I should not of stuck dick in

But who the Hell

__gives a

Fuck if it killed me?

A.I.D.S. takes so long

To kill somebody

A.I.D.S. takes so long

To kill somebody

And I know that there won't be

Another freeky fuck for me

So I don't give one

Damn good fuck now

A.I.D.S I won't spred

Since nobody else has

Sex with me

Any fucking ways

How could I regret

__screwin' up my sex life's future

When there is no sex in my future?

If only you could of been pretty

If only you left the room when I did

If only we could have waited

Maybe I could stay alive

Maybe I could of tooken care

And not thrown you out for my rights

But I can't change the fact that I hate you

And you couln't change for me

__what's the diff'rence?



D. L. Cannon

Submitted: November 29, 2008

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beautifully written, it was good

Sat, November 29th, 2008 8:08pm


Thank you for reading, ever since Booksie stopped indicating the number of reads I get I never know if anything gets looked out without a comment. Thanks.

Fri, February 13th, 2009 3:50pm

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