Roseless

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

taken from my book, "Rumble In The Mind!"

Roseless

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Did I admit it, today, that I loved you?

Was I supposed to?

Well, quite Frankly, I think that would be stupid

Why should I tell a woman like you, how I feel?

Why would you want to hear it?

The grip on my heart, my love for you has

Tears me up, and kicks my ass

You'll never be back in the bay, where you belong

You'll always be a long drive away

And I'll never have a car of my own

My heart oughtta let you go

But how can I?

You'll always be missed

And you're always gonna be

Out of reach

Even if you were here

It wouldn't even matter

It would not change a thing

I can't make you mine

It's as if we've already said "goodbye"

-

03-09-'19

D. L. Cannon


Submitted: March 11, 2019

© Copyright 2022 DLCannon. All rights reserved.

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unmasked delusions

I liked the sound of this: "did I admit it today that I loved you? Was I suppose to?"
Makes me wonder why she left or what happened

Tue, March 19th, 2019 6:06am

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L.O.L.. No. she wasn't even in a relationship with me. I just started having feelings for her, out of the middle of the blue, after she moved away, and realized that after she stated visiting thee area. She goes to meetings here in the bay sometimes, though not the meetings I met her at, usually. I refrained from getting close to her before she moved, because she was dating somebody else who I respected too much to try to steel away from. We were all apart of the same fellowship, and when to a lot of different meetings together. I was always attracted to her, since before they hooked up, but did not think I had feelings for her until just recently. Like a year after their breakup, and her moving away. Thanks for reading it. :)

Fri, March 22nd, 2019 12:13pm

unmasked delusions

oh, I see what you mean. thanks for sharing more of the story

Fri, March 22nd, 2019 9:30pm

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Thank you for giving me thee opportunity to clarify.

Fri, March 22nd, 2019 2:49pm

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