"So Close Now"

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

taken from my book, "Madness Is In Thee Air"

"So Close Now"


"And if you" want

"You can" jump

Off the

Nearist building


In the waters

Of some

Far away land

"And as for" me

"I will"

Splatter my heart

When I

Take a bouble barrel


Gun and blast



In my chest

To die

I know it is wrong!

I know it is wrong!

So I'll write down these lines

How horibol

Life was

When you placed yourself in mine


03-07-'09 #3

D. L. Cannon

Submitted: March 08, 2009

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B Costello

I like the last line
"How horrible life was when you placed yourself in mine"

Sun, March 8th, 2009 11:52pm


Thanks for the comment, it's thee only way I know if something is read.

Sun, March 8th, 2009 5:41pm

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