The Lines About A Line Are Thee Only Lie In These 264 Lines
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The Lines About A Line Are Thee Only Lie In These 264 Lines
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Primative minds
__go flyin' high
Mashed up potatoes
__go wandering off
And I think I could
__be eatin' some of those
____ya know?
"What to" think
__when you're just plain crazy?
How to feel
__when your heart is a loan
____oh
______oh no
________oh
Why?
Why is it time?
'Twas just gettin' started
'Tweren't prepared to part
Why?
Why aren't you mine?
You tell me it's over
I don't understand
-
It's paradise
__I always wanted to step in
Know I should
__always just walk away from it
But I crown my own
__self with my tears
____here, though
I line up all the blow
__just to snort up my nostrils
Climbing to the top
__of the bottom of nothin'
____I know
______yeah
________I know
Why?
Why is it time?
'Twas just gettin' started
'Tweren't prepared to to part
Why?
Why aren't you mine?
You tell me it's over
I don't understand
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Cryin' on a fence
__like a giant monster
I keep forgetting
__to just not bother
The past is the past
__and you made us like that
____for forever
Trapped to a wheel
__I attempt to self peel
Runnin' 'round, my attention span
__is so damned unreal
____what's
______the deal
________here?
Why?
Why is it time?
'Twas just gettin' started
'Tweren't prepared to part
Why?
Why aren't you mine?
You tell me it's over
I don't understand
-
Packin' my thoughts
__and loading them in a rifle
Pointing it at my portable
__refrigerator
Guess I shoulda' thought twice
__before I got bold
____oh no
Not nice to tell me
I'm already old though
But, Hell, it gets
__easier to freak
____out
______on you
________now
Why?
Why is it time?
'Twas just gettin' started
'Tweren't prepared to part
Why?
Why aren't you mine?
You tell me it's over
I don't understand
-
Miles and miles
__nowhere to go
unheard of meanings
__to a pocket nose
Should I climb out
__of the would works
____for ya?
Watch as the memories
__only prove to me
That you were never mine
__oh, that's why I'm blind
____I don't
______see
________them, yeah
Why?
Why is it time?
'Twas just gettin' started
'Tweren't prepared to part
Why?
Why aren't you mine?
You tell me it's over
I don't understand
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Oceans and oceans
__of a fogged mind
Only asking the world
__why you can't be mine
And I just get no answers
__lately
____yeah
Rhyme after rhyme
__people seem to ignoring it
Ratings just drop
__to the floor and I see no
____ending
______To
________it, yo
Why?
Why is it time?
ettin' started
'Tweren't prepared to part
Why?
Why aren't you mine?
You tell me it's over
I don't understand
-
Not gonna quit
__with these obsessive fits
Not gona stand
__'til I'm taken by the hand
Gonna have to wait
__in line for my turn
____to earn
But what's the use of findin'
__some one new?
What's the point of love
__if it ain't from you
____who
______knows me
________well?
Why?
Why is it time?
'Twas just gettin' started
'Tweren't prepared to part
Why?
Why aren't you mine?
You tell me it's over
I don't understand
-
Years are gonna come
__and rain is gonna fall
Not falling in love
__is gonna be so hard
The rain reminds me
__that there was a you
____such doom
To have gotten close
__just to lose
To have to let go
__and let you loose
____like
______a cooked
________goose
Why?
Why is it time?
'Twas just gettin' started
Tweren't prepared to part
Why?
Why aren't you mine?
You told me it's over
I don't understand
-
Watching me line up
__all my thoughts
Knocking them down
__all one by one
Never realizing
__why they are even
____thought up
They must be of you
__'cause I just forget
Don't wanna have you in my head
__again, just yet, 'cause
____what
______is a
________dream?
Why?
Why is it time?
'Twas just gettin' started
'Tweren't prepared to part
Why?
Why aren't you mine?
You told me it's over
I don't understand
-
And why the Hell am I sayin'
__that "I don't understand"
When I've heard you explain
__why I can't be your man?
I comprehend the break up
__so well that the truth is just stuck
____in my mind
Crawling back to you
__is not something I will do
You forced me out
__to never turn around
____unlike
______a
________circle
Why?
Why is it time?
'Twas just gettin' started
'Tweren't prepared to part
Why?
Why aren't you mine?
You told me it's over
I don't understand
-
What is wrong with me?
__why can't I get it thru my head?
Is it just somethin'
__I keep on forgettin'?
When the words you've cried
__crawled into my ears
____I hear
Wouldn't wanna not hear
__what you mean so dearly
No matter of the fact
__that it opposes my offer to take
____back
______what I've
________said
Why?
Why is it time?
'Twas just gettin' started
'Tweren't prepared part
Why?
Why aren't you mine?
You told me it's over
I don't understand
-
Last lines were meant
__to change the reader's position
But not a thing I say
__can make you change your mind here
You just couldn't undo
__what you've done
____leaving me
But that's what you think
__I don't agree with it
Still, I don't got forever
__to wait for you to do it
____'cause
______you just
________won't
Why?
Why is it time?
'Twas just gettin' started
'Tweren't prepared to part
Why?
Why aren't you mine?
You told me it's over
I don't understand
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12-29-'10 #2
D. L. Cannon
Submitted: December 30, 2010
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Hanorbi
Read the whole thing, and I like how your past relationship drives your poems so well. It's not a loose poem, either, it's very structured. Everything flows. I love how lyrical this is, and it would most definitely work well as a song.
Sat, February 6th, 2016 4:57amIf there truly are 264 lines to this poem, then you've got dedication. I don't know if I'd have the patience to count them all.. ;)
Great poem, DL. Very well done! :D
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Thank you so much for reading it! Yeah, I had it originally posted in 2010 but I accidentally left out 2 lines back then, and just put them in last week or so. I can't believe I would forget to do so considering how long I remember it took to edit it back in 2010. I remember it was painful work. Glad you liked it! :)
Sun, February 7th, 2016 1:42pm