Strongest Is The Silence

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Strongest is the silence.... A little something I wrote on the way to work, where all I could hear were the bloody cars. There are parts of this that certain people will not like, if you're one of those people, don't read it.

This piece may still not be finished yet.

" Do you wanna know where the dreams come from? Some show their Faith and some show none " - Rob Zombie - American Witch

Strongest is the silence, a screaming void of still

Memories of a long past time, a silver chalice fill

Painful is the beauty, a smile held by pins

The mechanical chime of a clockwork heart, that constantly beats within

Darkest is the sunlight, that blinds the lying eyes

The twisted thoughts, acid haunts, that you keep inside

Tortured is the soulless, a creature born of sin

Suicide, the freedom, the key you keep within

Brightest is the hatred, burning intensly hot

The devil is the baby, what is real is not

Happy is the liar, live the faithless dream

Beauty is the pain, resounding in your scream

Purest are the tears, a new born baby's cry

Don't see through me to all my sin, with the log in thine own eye

Sweetest is the acid, the vitriol and funeral pyres

To keep the chaste, a virgin waste, sodomise desire

Purest is the silence, that breaks a fragile mind

Submitted: May 19, 2007

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This evokes feeling- it's very nice. Great word choice. I hope to see more from you.

Sat, May 19th, 2007 8:03pm


Thankyou very much :) Glad you like this piece, as for more from me, there's plenty lol, from myself and my cerebral sibling, ThePseudoMe. Read till your hearts content. Thankyou for your comments :)

Sat, May 19th, 2007 1:06pm

JL Musgrave

Heart wrenchingly well done!

Sat, May 19th, 2007 8:44pm


Thankyou very much:)

Sat, May 19th, 2007 1:54pm

Saturday Night

Kick ass writing! SN

Sat, May 19th, 2007 8:56pm


Thankyou very much SN. Glad you like this piece. It was something I threw together on my mobile phone, lol. It was bloody hard work, stupid tiny buttons, lol.

Sat, May 19th, 2007 1:59pm

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