A Piece of Tale

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Humor  |  House: Booksie Classic

A twist of fate for Little Red Ridding Hood!

This is only a piece of tale

One that even Grimm's never told

About a girl meeting with grandma

A Red Hood kept her from the cold


Many thought she was innocent

But carried a devilish laugh

She skipped with a basket of food

Right off the forest path!


A wolf with an empty stomach

Had noticed this little girl lost

He wanted to taste her muffin

And would do it at any cost!


The little girl said she would share

If the wolf pointed the right way

He could sample her hidden treats

And they would both enjoy their day


The wolf had eagerly agreed

But then found himself begging please!

As the girl started skipping along

Proving only to be a tease!!!!


He would have settled for a snack

Now his meal was getting away

If she didn't leave him hanging there

She would still be alive today!!!


Submitted: February 05, 2010

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oh poor girl

Fri, February 5th, 2010 9:03pm


it happens ... :)

Fri, February 5th, 2010 1:11pm



lol, you totally had me at the end. lololol

Sat, February 6th, 2010 6:52am


She was a tease ... what could I say?? :)

Sat, February 6th, 2010 6:41am


do u like writing fairytales with a twist btw? bc i totally love reading them and i would totally enjoy it if u wrote more of this stuff. lol

Sat, February 6th, 2010 6:53am


yeah, I like fairy tales in general. The ones under this pen name is just for erotics though. I'm writing a children book and have some shorts under Daniel_Ross. I didn't really want to mix the two together and who knows at some point, I may delete the erotic ones.

Sat, February 6th, 2010 6:43am

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