Submitted: November 23, 2009
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Sounds intense....
I like the "curse your eyes, gouge them from their sockets, for He will come for you as well" part.
You should capitalize Lucifer though.
I love the bold font and stuff.
This kinda reminds me of my novel, "No Safe Haven" just replace Him with It.
lol.
no offence, but i think this sounds more sadistic! (if there's such a word, lol)
*jumps into poem and rescues you!*
there, you're still alive. XD
and just being random, after reading NinjaNIGHT's comment, do you like shitake mushroom? 'cause i love to eat that! hmm, so ignore this random babble if she's just making fun of you. lol. :D
Good one..again you didn't disapoint...the best part about your writing is...it can not be catagorized into a particular stream..u can call it a story or a poem, you find it creepy or sad...every time you read it you develop a new opinion about it...very few writings are of that standards....keep rolling on..
Mon, November 23rd, 2009 2:09pmI have a turtle named Lucifer Hamish!
Well his full name is.....
Lucifer Franklin Flipper Hamish III
:D
But you already knew that.
Hahaha Shitaki Mushrooms is my word for (S) (H) (I) (T)
Shh... Don't Tell -_-
Very nice - smooth - powerful
Fri, November 27th, 2009 10:24pmI like the lay out, i like how the words are in bold, gives it more power thanks for sharing!
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ninjaNIGHT
Well Shitaki Mushrooms.
Mon, November 23rd, 2009 8:33amThis is Awesome :D
I love it :)
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ahaha radical demi
Mon, November 23rd, 2009 12:36amnice to know you were so excited you even wrote capitals for every word =D