do you believe in monsters?...

Poem by: dontloveme

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i just thought this up on the spot, it'd be a cool short story or something though right? depends on how people respond to it...

i have been told a line before

once thought silly, just folklore

but now i know that this is true

even our lives are borrowed

to be taken back day or night

tomorrow is no promise, fight

against the ominous, hovering fate

which threatens our existence

now i knew the tragic story

not god-like, just sad and gory

a drastic premonition

it may sound melodramatic, yes

just some pre-teen nonsense

but i have seen, with my very own eyes

a creature of the dark

satan, lucifer, or the devil

it is evil personified

and He is after me, i know it

yet there's nowhere left to hide

have you seen Him?

curse your eyes

gouge them from their sockets

for He will come for you as well

your nightmare, riding high

in your home, and in your bed

rest your head and you'll be dead

this isn't a joke, so please don't laugh

the fallen angel rises

now the demons come to get me

as i write this, my very life is in danger of being taken back

forcibly, and mercilessly

please, help me

before the cold fingers of death

wrap themselves around my heart

and squeeze

Submitted: November 23, 2009

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ninjaNIGHT

Well Shitaki Mushrooms.

This is Awesome :D

I love it :)

Demetriaaa.

Mon, November 23rd, 2009 8:33am

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ahaha radical demi
nice to know you were so excited you even wrote capitals for every word =D

Mon, November 23rd, 2009 12:36am

Behold

Sounds intense....
I like the "curse your eyes, gouge them from their sockets, for He will come for you as well" part.
You should capitalize Lucifer though.
I love the bold font and stuff.
This kinda reminds me of my novel, "No Safe Haven" just replace Him with It.
lol.

Mon, November 23rd, 2009 9:21am

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oh really? thanks, maybe i'll give yours a read :)
yeah i probly should've capitalized it but bleh, this is the texting generation lol
thanks though

Tue, November 24th, 2009 12:03am

august138

no offence, but i think this sounds more sadistic! (if there's such a word, lol)
*jumps into poem and rescues you!*
there, you're still alive. XD

and just being random, after reading NinjaNIGHT's comment, do you like shitake mushroom? 'cause i love to eat that! hmm, so ignore this random babble if she's just making fun of you. lol. :D

Mon, November 23rd, 2009 12:04pm

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ahaha shitake mushrooms? i've never tasted them man.
lol it's nice to know someone can try to save me from myself :P
P.S...FYI sadistic is definetly a word =)

Tue, November 24th, 2009 12:07am

Gagan

Good one..again you didn't disapoint...the best part about your writing is...it can not be catagorized into a particular stream..u can call it a story or a poem, you find it creepy or sad...every time you read it you develop a new opinion about it...very few writings are of that standards....keep rolling on..

Mon, November 23rd, 2009 2:09pm

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wow, thats nice to know, thanks.
if i'm lucky i can keep creating original works
lol btw i did have trouble when it came to the type of poem.
'horror' was the best i could think of

Tue, November 24th, 2009 12:09am

ninjaNIGHT

I have a turtle named Lucifer Hamish!

Well his full name is.....

Lucifer Franklin Flipper Hamish III

:D

But you already knew that.

Wed, November 25th, 2009 8:50am

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yes, yes i did 0_0

Wed, November 25th, 2009 3:10am

ninjaNIGHT

Hahaha Shitaki Mushrooms is my word for (S) (H) (I) (T)

Shh... Don't Tell -_-

Wed, November 25th, 2009 8:52am

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oh nah i won't tell
i'm sure NO ONE will find out,
even if you did just broadcast it on a public website...