do you believe in monsters?...

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic

i just thought this up on the spot, it'd be a cool short story or something though right? depends on how people respond to it...

i have been told a line before
once thought silly, just folklore
but now i know that this is true
 
even our lives are borrowed
 
to be taken back day or night
tomorrow is no promise, fight
against the ominous, hovering fate
 
which threatens our existence
 
now i knew the tragic story
not god-like, just sad and gory
 
a drastic premonition
 
it may sound melodramatic, yes
just some pre-teen nonsense
but i have seen, with my very own eyes
 
a creature of the dark
 
satan, lucifer, or the devil
it is evil personified
and He is after me, i know it
yet there's nowhere left to hide
have you seen Him?
curse your eyes
gouge them from their sockets
for He will come for you as well
 
your nightmare, riding high
 
in your home, and in your bed
rest your head and you'll be dead
this isn't a joke, so please don't laugh
 
the fallen angel rises
 
now the demons come to get me
as i write this, my very life is in danger of being taken back
forcibly, and mercilessly
please, help me
before the cold fingers of death
wrap themselves around my heart
and squeeze
 


Submitted: November 23, 2009

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ninjaNIGHT

Well Shitaki Mushrooms.

This is Awesome :D

I love it :)

Demetriaaa.

Mon, November 23rd, 2009 8:33am

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ahaha radical demi
nice to know you were so excited you even wrote capitals for every word =D

Mon, November 23rd, 2009 12:36am

Behold

Sounds intense....
I like the "curse your eyes, gouge them from their sockets, for He will come for you as well" part.
You should capitalize Lucifer though.
I love the bold font and stuff.
This kinda reminds me of my novel, "No Safe Haven" just replace Him with It.
lol.

Mon, November 23rd, 2009 9:21am

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oh really? thanks, maybe i'll give yours a read :)
yeah i probly should've capitalized it but bleh, this is the texting generation lol
thanks though

Tue, November 24th, 2009 12:03am

august138

no offence, but i think this sounds more sadistic! (if there's such a word, lol)
*jumps into poem and rescues you!*
there, you're still alive. XD

and just being random, after reading NinjaNIGHT's comment, do you like shitake mushroom? 'cause i love to eat that! hmm, so ignore this random babble if she's just making fun of you. lol. :D

Mon, November 23rd, 2009 12:04pm

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ahaha shitake mushrooms? i've never tasted them man.
lol it's nice to know someone can try to save me from myself :P
P.S...FYI sadistic is definetly a word =)

Tue, November 24th, 2009 12:07am

Gagan

Good one..again you didn't disapoint...the best part about your writing is...it can not be catagorized into a particular stream..u can call it a story or a poem, you find it creepy or sad...every time you read it you develop a new opinion about it...very few writings are of that standards....keep rolling on..

Mon, November 23rd, 2009 2:09pm

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wow, thats nice to know, thanks.
if i'm lucky i can keep creating original works
lol btw i did have trouble when it came to the type of poem.
'horror' was the best i could think of

Tue, November 24th, 2009 12:09am

ninjaNIGHT

I have a turtle named Lucifer Hamish!

Well his full name is.....

Lucifer Franklin Flipper Hamish III

:D

But you already knew that.

Wed, November 25th, 2009 8:50am

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yes, yes i did 0_0

Wed, November 25th, 2009 3:10am

ninjaNIGHT

Hahaha Shitaki Mushrooms is my word for (S) (H) (I) (T)

Shh... Don't Tell -_-

Wed, November 25th, 2009 8:52am

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oh nah i won't tell
i'm sure NO ONE will find out,
even if you did just broadcast it on a public website...

Wed, November 25th, 2009 3:11am

Jenna A

Very nice - smooth - powerful

Fri, November 27th, 2009 10:24pm

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thanks :)

Fri, November 27th, 2009 6:42pm

MissGC

I like the lay out, i like how the words are in bold, gives it more power thanks for sharing!

Mon, November 30th, 2009 8:05am

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awesome
great you liked it :D

Mon, November 30th, 2009 10:33pm

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