To my dear mother

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is the poem I wrote for my mother for mothers day...I read it to my little sister, but she didn't get it so leave a comment on it!

People say red roses are beautiful

That every moment is cherishable

That every place is a world of it's own

That even memories can give you comfort when you're alone

People say violets are blue

That every dreams' intensions are to come ture

That a sorry can heal all the scar

And a smile can light up a sky full of stars

That a beam of hope is bright than the Sun

That through rain, snow, sleet or shine a hero will always come

Roses can be very beautiful

Every moment can be cherishable

Every place could be a world of it's own

But roses nor the places give a sense of home

Violets are a mesmerizing shape of blue

But you're my only dream come ture

A sorry might heal, but it's your tears that leave the scars

And it's your smile that gives life to my stars

You're my Earth and sky

The one and only in my eyes


Submitted: May 27, 2010

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Sai Ryoko

Reminds me of a life of a mother. How she raises her kids and loves them with everything she has. Well to put it straight the poem reminds me of the love of a mother. I like it though :)

Thu, November 13th, 2014 3:49pm


Gee thanks! It was written over four years ago so the style is a little off, any suggestion/feedback on writing?

Thu, November 13th, 2014 9:06am

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