Poem about a vampires uncontrollable thirst for blood

Night has fallen dark
Clouds depart
Lightening strikes
Angels and Demons,
renaissance
 
I can smell…
The scent of blood
The breath of hunters
The fear of humans
They don’t know what I can do
 
They have breached my lair,
There is my meal
Thirst for blood,
uncontrollable,
ready to pounce
 
Human encounters
Crosses drawn
Full speed,
sharp teeth biting into jugular
 
I am in heaven
The wonderful scent of blood,
longevity of life prolonged,
as blood consumed by me
 
One down two to go,
blood stained on my sharp teeth
As quick as a flash
All dead
 
As daylight comes,
I remain a vampire myth


Submitted: November 24, 2008

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Desperately Wanting

this is good. veryyy intense :)

Mon, November 24th, 2008 10:23pm

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thx, for the good comments

Mon, November 24th, 2008 2:25pm

Vampire Princces

kool, intense, deep and so vampirisc me likey ^^

Mon, November 24th, 2008 10:27pm

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thx for the good comments

Mon, November 24th, 2008 2:33pm

Hyde

Ooo intense and deep, I loved it

Mon, November 24th, 2008 11:04pm

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thx

Tue, November 25th, 2008 9:06am

Hanman

I really liked this.

Mon, November 24th, 2008 11:10pm

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thx

Tue, November 25th, 2008 9:05am

bloodrayne

really good...i liked it

Mon, November 24th, 2008 11:19pm

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thx

Tue, November 25th, 2008 9:04am

Lady Justice

So sweet and controlling made me want to do the same...cept i can't drink blood...O.0 oh well! XD NIce work!

Mon, November 24th, 2008 11:50pm

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thx for the great comments

Tue, November 25th, 2008 9:04am

PALERMO

oh my gosh... that was really good.

Tue, November 25th, 2008 7:39pm

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thx

Tue, November 25th, 2008 12:38pm

FunnyBunny

This is the first poem of yours I've read and I'm not disapointed. Very very intense and dare I say dark?

Nicely done

Tue, November 25th, 2008 10:50pm

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thx

Wed, November 26th, 2008 7:39am

Bella Italian

Ohhhhh I liked this poem...great job!!

Wed, November 26th, 2008 3:06am

the Lame One

Nice way with words, it flowed well and ended even better. though i try to keep as much away from popular poetry i found this stiring.gud job

Wed, November 26th, 2008 6:28am

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thx glad u liked it

Wed, November 26th, 2008 7:38am

DraconianKnight12

Wed, November 26th, 2008 3:40pm

DraconianKnight12

thx for the great comments guys

Wed, November 26th, 2008 3:40pm

neji chan

This was a great poem! Very well written.

Thu, November 27th, 2008 5:59pm

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thx for the good comments

Thu, November 27th, 2008 10:32am

brenda20222

It's different, but I like it.

Thu, November 27th, 2008 11:13pm

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thx

Fri, November 28th, 2008 9:33am

S.C. Kross

:) I like this very much, And I'm not just saying that because it's centered around my favorite creatures. :) It's truly good.

Fri, November 28th, 2008 4:34am

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thx, for the good comments

Fri, November 28th, 2008 9:31am

detour27

this was really good keep writing!

Fri, November 28th, 2008 6:10pm

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thank you

Fri, November 28th, 2008 11:01am

Marathongman

Very nice - I'm a fan of that style

Fri, November 28th, 2008 6:50pm

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thx

Fri, November 28th, 2008 11:00am

mariah2117

very good. Exactly how vampires rlly are. =] Awesome poem ??

Fri, November 28th, 2008 7:32pm

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thx

Fri, November 28th, 2008 12:32pm

TheFireFadesAway

Wow, intense and very descriptive
Well done!
- Fire.

Fri, November 28th, 2008 7:34pm

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thx

Fri, November 28th, 2008 12:31pm

Isabeau

Really good! I enjoyed the flow and the visuals that you gave the reader, but I think that next time you could do even better. But very good!

Beau

Sat, November 29th, 2008 12:59am

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thx, and i will try to write even better

Sat, November 29th, 2008 4:15am

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