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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

tearing down the walls

we all build walls around us

our refuge of safety

so a man who cares must cherish

removing each brick so patiently .


believing in forever love

then love will conquer all

even the highest barrier

or toughest castle wall .


like joshua i'm blowing

though my horn makes no sound

it emits a message from my heart

to make your walls tumble to the ground .


i long to taste your kisses

to touch as lovers do

but until those walls have fallen

i'll wait patiently for you .


you know that i love you

and i know that you love me

we are going to be forever

in love eternally .


dream of me my darling

as i now dream of you

full of love and passion

pure, white, clean and true .


i carry you in my heart

as you carry me in yours

soon we'll have no barriers

no walls or tight shut doors .

Submitted: November 13, 2008

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Classy Peach


Thu, November 13th, 2008 1:54pm


thankyou maam and welcome home .

Thu, November 13th, 2008 9:51pm


Girls like nothing more than attentions

Thu, November 13th, 2008 2:46pm


and most deserve it , putting up with us men

Thu, November 13th, 2008 9:49pm


Honestly, before I read this poem it wasn't what I was expecting it to be, but it definiately exceeded my expectations. I loved it! Keep writing...

Fri, November 14th, 2008 8:15pm


i believe in forever love and was letting someone else know my feelings , the walls came down , thanks for the comments

Sat, November 15th, 2008 8:01am


all things put up, can be taken down.
I hope this wall will soon distruct.
People in love should never be apart.
Beautiful poem. angellynn.

Fri, November 14th, 2008 9:19pm


the walls are down . thanks for the comments

Sat, November 15th, 2008 7:59am


i'm not religious but this was pretty good. write on!

Sat, November 15th, 2008 5:00am


thanks so much you don't have to be religious to believe in love

Sat, November 15th, 2008 7:58am


respect mate and i have just seen , the walls have gone .

Wed, November 19th, 2008 12:52am


they were never there if you had looked properly .

Tue, November 18th, 2008 7:58pm


this reminds me of myself.
and how i'm still waiting of someone to tear down my walls;
but, i have a long time to wait :]
You write beautifully.
The second to last stanza is my favorite, by the way!(:
good job.

Wed, November 19th, 2008 2:16am


your walls will crumble too and hopefully ,you'll never feel the need to erect them ever again .

Tue, November 18th, 2008 7:54pm

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