The First Time I Saw You!

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A romantic love poem to the one I love.




The First Time I Saw You

The first time I saw you my heart skipped a beat,
I knew straight away we were destined to meet.
I went weak in the knees and my stomach went tight,
I felt in that moment this has got to be right.

At first I was shy; I didn't know what to say,
But I had to say something to woo you my way.
My first words to you were clumsy and crude,
I was trying so hard to be nice and not rude.

There was joy and excitement when you spoke back to me,
This newfound romance had just filled me with glee.
It was love at first sight when I saw you that day,
In a moment my loneliness all swept away.

I've never loved anyone so much before,
It's a wonderful feeling that makes me want more.
These feelings I have are so strong and sincere,
I want you to know how much I love you my dear.

You're the sun and the moon all rolled into one,
You bring happiness, joy and a whole lot of fun.
I want to be with you for the rest of my life,
I love you so much I want
to make you my wife.

Happy days are ahead for the both of us now,
There'll be good times and bad times but we'll make it somehow.
Being with you is what matters the most,
Till death takes me away to the heavenly host



Submitted: October 29, 2010

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That is beautiful!

Thu, January 9th, 2014 11:30pm


I love it, great job

Thu, March 6th, 2014 10:29pm


Only I wish that my writing was as good as thee

Seriously man you got skills great job and hey check out mine if you'd please
Sure can use some more comments

Wed, May 27th, 2015 12:07am

Gaea Killarny


Mon, August 31st, 2015 3:25am


This is very tidy to read, brings good thoughts of loved ones to mind. 'till death', words stopped the other good feeling lines.

Thu, June 2nd, 2016 1:38pm


Lucky lady

Sun, December 3rd, 2017 9:57am

Absan's thoughts

Wow its awesome

Sat, January 18th, 2020 6:52pm

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